Poem/story about forbidden love,and the role a Mountain played….

Kong wanted to stay the night,

had brought tents and other gear,

to show Maria the nightly sights,

the same sights your father loved so dear…..

This caught her by surprise,

she questionly looked into his eyes,

you met my father here on the mountain,

Kong started to explain……

I met him once up here,

I was very young at the time,

it was my very first climb,

and I came alone with no gear……

I remember our conversation well,

I said very little and his words were few,

but alot of meanings they did tell,

and we both loved the view…..

He said down there our people did fight,

yet upon them God shone his sun,

and at night gave them all the moonlight,

yet they didnt live as one……

Up here we are closer to God,

so we better show godly fear,

come share my tent and gear,

and lets put away the rod……

I was in no postion to argue,

gave me a binoculars and pointed at your homestead,

I said its a beautiful view,

he spoke of a little girl safe in her bed……

We exchanged gifts for life,

I took my greenstone from around my neck,

he gave me his pocket knife,

his name was engraved Laars Deheek…..

That was forty five years ago,

you would have been about five,

this pocket knife you may not know,

but his name you can identify…..

Maria started to laugh and cry,

only a woman can do such a thing,

and only God knows why,

we only marvel at the joy it brings…..

Maria told Kong about the greenstone,

and what her father said before he died,

it was given to him by the mountain,

when he was up there all alone……

He always thought the mountain was old,

but he’s really very young,

and has a heart of gold,

told me I hope you’ll meet him one day,

He left the greenstone with me,

I have kept safe as can be,

it is a treasure beyond compare,

and I know the mountain does care…..

Their arms held each other,

they stood in silence in memory of a time,

of a long ago event,

when a man and boy shared a tent…..

Those were the only words we spoke,

we went our different ways,

I’ve only realised in the last few days,

he was your father that kindly old bloke…………………to be continued………….

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  • Marie Antoinette on Mar 2, 2010

    Nice turn of events, about the meeting of the father and Kong, and the exchange of presents.

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 2, 2010

    A good continuation. I am enjoying the bond they are sharing.

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 2, 2010

    thank you Marie that would put Kong into his 60s.But due to his lifestyle, he would look about mid 40s, your comments are always welcome,and the very same to you to 8Shei8…..`

  • XXElleXX on Mar 3, 2010

    This is the type of story that lives in your heart forever Stan…it brings people and communities together…kinda miss hearing the elders back home chatting and singing…you learn so much from their wisdom…magic stuff ~ a very heartwarming chapter in this series…kia ora Stan :-)

    The Maori are famous for their carving skills in bone, wood and greenstone (jade) eg. jewellery.
    Decorative carving was once used as a means of story telling and is still a deeply traditional Maori art form. The shapes of the jewellery are based on natural and spiritual images and each has a special meaning. ~ Just thought I throw that in there Stan :-)

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 3, 2010

    Kia ora taku hoa…..thank you very much for your comments here and that added piece of information is great,Seems like you were brought up on the Marae,just as I was.I’m of the Tainui canoe,Waikato,and of the Ngati Haua sub tribe.Live in Morrinsville……So good to hear from you again….

  • Cynthia Cox on Mar 4, 2010

    One day, my dear friend; may you know the joys I have received in sharing your art with us all. I can not say it enough that the hope and bridge building you are doing on this mountain with the love of a man and woman; and traditions we all recall and hold dear; how it really does touch hearts and lives. You let your own heart shine through here. Thank you my friend and I can not wait to see where they go now:)

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 4, 2010

    You are always most welcome Cynthia Cox,and I value your genuine heartfelt appreciations for this poem/story.thank you very much…..

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