Poem/story about forbidden love.

She went to see their family physician,

conducted some routine tests,

then he confirmed her position,

your seven weeks pregnant at the best……

She couldn’t believe what she heard,

thought she was pass that stage,

was excited and felt absurd,

to be pregnant at her age……

All kind of emotions went through her head,

just wanted to let kong know,

to him she wanted to go,

doctor advised her to rest in bed……..

Kong was simply over the moon,

once again he offered up thanks,

would play his guitar and croon,

Maria would playfully swoon…..

Of their undying love they swore,

for each other ever more.

kong asked for her hand in marriage,

both knew there’s no golden carriage……

Would be many storms to weather,

would take unsurpassing love to survive,

as long as they were together,

the mountain would keep them alive…….

At first Marie was shocked,

she would mope about and brood,

the family friends were also rocked,

understandably in a negative mood……

Marie kept mentioning their family,

of the reproach and terrible shame,

to be carrying a child of a Maori,

and now your going to marry…..

Mother what have you done to our family,

our lives will never be the same,

we have pride and feelings too,

of our Dutch heritage and name……..

You have lost a good man in Michal,

spend all your time away from us,

we don’t want to see you fail,

we are losing our faith and trust……

Once again Maria spoke to her family,

both her son and daughter,

her son and daughter in law,

while the two little ones played on the floor……

Wanted to put their minds at ease,

I’ve never been so peaceful and happy,

and with yous I’d like to share that peace,

and to re build a happy family……

Marie looked at her mother as a woman,

tears of compassion swelled in her eyes,

saw her mum as a queen who had found her king,

and was living in her own paradise……………………to be continued…………….

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Comments (12)
  • seema1962 on Mar 3, 2010

    Very nice poem.

  • ganeshgolha on Mar 3, 2010

    Thanks for sharing

  • albert1jemi on Mar 3, 2010

    nice post

  • AlmaG on Mar 3, 2010

    A wonderful poerty/story.

  • Michael Eboh on Mar 3, 2010

    SO SO GOOD AND LOVELY. NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!

  • Silent Wasp on Mar 3, 2010

    One word; Magnificent! :D

  • sambhafusia on Mar 3, 2010

    Excellent write..see u in my post dear..thanks for ur comments

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 3, 2010

    The excitement is growing :>

  • standingproud on Mar 4, 2010

    Hi Stan :) .
    man I have a lot of chapters to catch up on.

  • Cynthia Cox on Mar 4, 2010

    I can not express my shock:) you have definelty turned this up a notch now; job well done. I hope you let them carry on in martial bliss to continue building their bridges of humanity and happiness:) great job my friend.

  • papaleng on Mar 4, 2010

    i enjoy the story..

  • Marie Antoinette on Mar 4, 2010

    Thought this was going to happen, from last one. Keeps getting interesting, well done!

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