Poem/story of forbidden love….it just never ends…..

Mariaan

Two years has passed away,

Mariaan came home for the holidays,

was bored and restless,

her mother suggested she go for a ride…….

Grab a horse and go for a ride,

she opted to take the four wheel drive,

Marie warned her not to get into any spills,

especially on the steep hills……

Also told her about some contractors,

cutting timber from out the back,

and the farm manager was moving cattle,

try not to block his track…….

She drove off along the mountain way,

then down into a beautiful valley,

it was a very hot and sunny day,

as she maneuvered along a narrow gully…….

Then engaging a lower gear,

up a steep hill she did glide,

sped down the other side,

scattering livestock with fear…….

Did wheelie’s on flat pastured land,

it was in a beautiful state,

she was still on their land,

she skidded to a stop at a wire gate……

Read the sign native land keep out,

saw the wire gate wasn’t hooked,

and there were no natives about,

surely out here I’m not going to get booked……

Besides in the far off distant she could see,

among the trees a beautiful waterfall,

that meant nice cool water,

and maybe a swim in the raw……

Sure enough the water was clear as crystal,

and there was a beautiful pool,

and not a soul within a whistle,

completely undressed she waded into the pool……

It was absolutely freezing and refreshing,

she splashed about and swam towards the falls,

baring her firm breasts against the cascading water’s,

this set her nipples a tingling……

Then she heard a man’s voice shout HEY!!,

as she was almost out of the water,

she quickly dropped down again,

couldn’t hide anything in the crystal clear water’s…….

She couldn’t see his face properly,

as she was looking up into the sun,

but he sure looked a handsome one,

then again he spoke abruptly…….

You better get out of there,

Some bro’s coming down here soon,

and I don’t think you’ll give them a scare,

you shouldn’t even be here……

Cant you Pakeha’s read your own language, (Pakeha is Maori word for white people)

didn’t you read the sign back there,

hurry up and get out of here,

I’ll wait for you at the gate……

She very slowly drove through the gate,

they briefly looked at one another,

in that magic moment their green eyes met,

it seemed like an act of fate…….

She slowly drove away,

as she looked through her rear vision mirror,

muttered ‘come on turn around’ then smiled oh yeah,

this was the beginning of the end of a new era……………ko mutu…..finish/end…….

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Comments (17)
  • Jenny Heart on Mar 9, 2010

    Your stories always keep me guessing.

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 9, 2010

    The end of this series of the “Mountain of love”…….

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 10, 2010

    Beautiful story Stan! I love how you continue the story with the new generation.

  • Temjen Imchen on Mar 10, 2010

    Very good story series. I have enjoyed reading them. Thanks, Stan.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 10, 2010

    I have also enjoyed the series and you have ended it so well.

    Christine

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 10, 2010

    Thank you Christine you are more than welcome.

  • Michael Eboh on Mar 10, 2010

    Thanks Mr. Stan. I enjoy every bit of your stories and love how you ended it.

    Cheers!

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 10, 2010

    Very interesting story and I love the pics with this one, especially the waterfall.

  • papaleng on Mar 10, 2010

    your lovely photos really complement such a beautiful story. A very good piece for a novel.

  • Neva Flores on Mar 11, 2010

    a beautiful story you have kept us going with…………

  • standingproud on Mar 11, 2010

    I am very proud of you Stan.
    Wonderful talented man.

  • albert1jemi on Mar 11, 2010

    good work

  • Marie Antoinette on Mar 11, 2010

    This was a perfect ending; it truly is the beginning of the end. Enjoyed it a lot. I was said that Maria and Kong died but this ending made up for it.

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 11, 2010

    Thanks to everyone here,it is very encouraging.

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 11, 2010

    Thank you Micheal Eboh..I know you said you had an idea how this poem/story would end, did it end the way you felt it would end…..thank you for your comments all the way through….

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 11, 2010

    I’ll let you in on a little secret Marie,they will live on in their son.

  • Cynthia Cox on Mar 13, 2010

    You have done a remarkable job with this story of love and continuing. You are a writer and poet after my own heart. Your works are genuis my friend. A novel this shall be:)

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