Poem/story about forbidden love…

Been about a year without Bill,

seemed like ages,

Maria did suffer and became ill,

but she recovered in stages…..

Knew Bill was a fine man,

he had good intentions and values,

Maria would soon understand,

there’s no winners or losers…..

She awoke early and perky,

showered and dressed for the trek,

donned some old jeans and rugby jersey,

felt carefree and what the heck…..

In the last few days she decided,

to go and climb that mountain,

even if she just stood beside it,

that would be a little gain…..

Thought about taking her car,

then she changed her mind,

would ride her horse this time,

it didn’t seem that far,

Waved to her mom standing by the door,

and with her pack on her back,

she’d go where she’d never been before,

started to follow the old mountain track…..

She wanted to let go the past,

get rid of the hurts and pains,

a time for a new blast,

to try and taste love again…..

A time to plant new seeds,

a time to reap and harvest,

a time for womanly needs,

a time to seek out the best…..

When born and raised on a farm,

its the best school for learning,

of natures ways and charms,

you become better at discerning…..

She was in her mid forties,

still very fit and lean,

looked much younger than her peers,

today she felt like a teen…..

She felt good riding her horse,

was given by her dad as a foal,

a loving present of course,

to her it was like gold…..

Thought of her fathers words about the mountain

where things looks small when looking down,

it eases any problems or pain,

and the air is much clearer on higher ground…..

Sometimes he would tell her,

that mountain must have a wise mind,

its seen a lot of things occur,

and its been around along time…………to be continued…………………….

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Comments (15)
  • Michael Eboh on Feb 3, 2010

    Nicely put. Lo…

  • amandeep13 on Feb 3, 2010

    Marvelous

    Keep it up

  • sambhafusia on Feb 3, 2010

    well written..good share…

  • sambhafusia on Feb 3, 2010

    well written..

  • OnlineSam on Feb 3, 2010

    good …

  • albert1jemi on Feb 3, 2010

    great share

  • Marie Antoinette on Feb 3, 2010

    Excellent write, love the pictures too.

  • Lady Sunshine on Feb 3, 2010

    A poetic story…makes is more delightful. Charming piece.

  • Lady Sunshine on Feb 3, 2010

    “…makes it more delightful.” That is what I meant to say. lol.

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 3, 2010

    I go to the beach to clear my head sometimes. Looking forward to the continuation.

  • Judy Kaelin on Feb 3, 2010

    Excellent!

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 3, 2010

    thanks very much my fellow poets,for all your encouraging comments….nice one….

  • Kris Tagre on Feb 5, 2010

    a walk in the mountain or by the beach is very therapeutic indeed..lovely (”,)

  • vbezerra on Feb 7, 2010

    like you said very nice job!!!

  • Cynthia Cox on Feb 14, 2010

    Excellent as individual pieces but remarkable as as whole. Wonderful story

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