Sometime you just have to move on.

Moving forward to escape your past.

Moving quickly, leaving it behind at last.

Moving on will remove the shadows you cast.

Moving is really the best thing,

do it for your own behalf.

Move to remove the problems you mask.

Keep moving don’t half-step.

Make your move extreme, go first-class.

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  • Darla Cooke on Nov 16, 2009

    Very good poem!

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 16, 2009

    If you’ve got to move, you might as well say it as well as you have here. Nice.

  • Themax on Nov 16, 2009

    nice poem,Thank you!!!

  • Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 16, 2009

    Yes, moving on is good. For all us, even me & even you. :) Nicely done.

  • Mike1229 on Nov 16, 2009

    great!

  • Snooky on Nov 16, 2009

    Nothing but first class all the ding dong way

  • Gail Nobles on Nov 16, 2009

    Really cool poem and photo too. It goes along with your poem perfectly. Great job.

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