Listing qualities that make a mate special and depicting why you fell in love with them to begin with.

There is something about

the way you pout,

causing the amusement in me

to well up and sprout.

Your wit and charm

sounds off an alarm

that is directly connected

 to my heart.

Your smile I can’t resist.

I find it to be contagious,

spreading across my face

and there to persist.

Your eyes are like

an ocean of blue,

staring back at me

as I am fixated on you.

I love to feel

your soft kind hair

nestled against my skin.

The softness never leaves

and can be felt

over and over again.

All of your wonderful qualities

are too numerous to list.

You are perfect in every way

throughout each given day.

Being with you

is as fresh as

 the month of May.

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  • jimbob1 on Mar 6, 2010

    DB…This is a cute little ditty depicting some characteristics of an onviously charming guy. I like it a lot…maybe I might have to change my name to “Mr. Wonderful”!!! You have obviousl;y captured some of the characteristics of this charming someone and highlighted some of the more obvious. To write about them all would probably equal the length of Tolstoy’s epic War and Peace!!!

  • chefpete41 on Mar 6, 2010

    very nice.

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