Just a short poem about music.

Music dancing round my brain,
My feet going down the drain,
The base is pumping through my head,
My brain feels like its turning to bread,
The music numbs the fear so blind,
I am hoping to find peace of mind,
Getting lost in the time,
I only wish this was mine.

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  • Darla Smith on Jan 21, 2009

    Wonderful poem. I like the rhyming and how smoothly it flows.

  • cardy on Jan 21, 2009

    i heard music lovely pome.

  • Intrepidus on Jan 21, 2009

    Felt like listening to a music… Nice!

  • denus on Jan 21, 2009

    great job again!!!!!

    cheers.

  • HersheyKiss07 on Jan 23, 2009

    Nice poem Strong flow Keep it up

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jan 23, 2009

    neat!!

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