Story about a cute couple, with an interesting suggestion.

Piya married Hitesh this day. At the end of the wedding party, Piya’s mother gave her a newly opened bank saving passbook With Rs.1000 deposit amount.Mother: Piya, take this passbook. Keep it as a record of your marriage life. When there’s something happy and memorable happened in your new life, put some money in. Write down what it’s about next to the line. The more memorable the event is, the more money you can put in. I’ve done the first one for you today. Do the others with Hitesh. When you look back after years, you can know how much happiness you’ve had.’

Piya shared this with Hitesh when getting home. They both thought it was a great idea and were anxious to know when the second deposit can be made.

This was what they did after certain time:

- 7 Feb: Rs.100, first birthday celebration for Hitesh after marriage

- 1 Mar: Rs.300, salary raise for Piya

- 20 Mar: Rs.200, vacation trip to Bali

- 15 Apr: Rs.2000, Piya got pregnant

- 1 Jun: Rs.1000, Hitesh got promoted

…. and so on…

However, after years, they started fighting and arguing for trivial things. They didn’t talk much. They regretted that they had married the most nasty people in the world…. no more love… One day Piya talked to her Mother: ‘Mom, we can’t stand it anymore.

We agree to divorce. I can’t imagine how I decided to marry this guy!!!’

Mother: ‘Sure, girl, that’s no big deal. Just do whatever you want if you really can’t stand it. But before that, do one thing first. Remember the saving passbook I gave you on your wedding day? Take out all money and spend it first. You shouldn’t keep any record of such a poor marriage.’

Piya thought it was true. So she went to the bank, waiting at the queue and planning to cancel the account. While she was waiting, she took a look at the passbook record. She looked, and looked, and looked. Then the memory of all the previous joy and happiness just came up her mind. Her eyes were then filled with tears. She left and went home. When she was home, she handed the passbook to Hitesh, asked him to spend the money before getting divorce.

The next day, Hitesh gave the passbook back to Piya.

She found a new deposit of Rs.5000. And a line next to the record: ‘This is the day I notice how much I’ve loved you thru out all these years. How much happiness you’ve brought me.’

They hugged and cried, putting the passbook back to the safe.”Life is about correcting mistakes.”

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  • Atanacio on Jul 27, 2011

    Article this was a sweet lesson about life … everything happens and then you come full circle– I give you two thumbs up :)

  • article on Jul 27, 2011

    thanx alot atanacio…..:)))))

  • Rosettaartist1 on Jul 27, 2011

    Agree with Atanacio. Good.

  • Nikhilesh on Jul 27, 2011

    superlyk…beautiful article..:)

  • article on Jul 27, 2011

    thanx rosettaartist …:))))

  • article on Jul 27, 2011

    thanx alot nikhilesh … for your surrlyk….:))))))

  • article on Jul 27, 2011

    ohh … mistaken thanx for your suprlyks…:D

  • cute nisha on Jul 27, 2011

    hiii there … lovely story .

  • Farris Spoiler on Jul 27, 2011

    hmm intersting but toooooo boring lol

  • article on Jul 27, 2011

    hey cute nisha … thanx alot …:)))))

  • article on Jul 27, 2011

    hehee apoorva … thanx alot for your confused view ..:D:D
    anythng cn either be interesting or boring …. lol
    it cn nvr be both at same time

  • Dreamy777 on Jul 27, 2011

    nice poem

  • LoveDoctor on Jul 27, 2011

    Women and men have different needs. Arguments are inevitable in a relationship. They will happen at some point. The key is to communicate & hopefully resolve it in a mature way so you don’t keep fighting over the same trivial matters. It’s okay to argue, but you do have to keep a line of respect between each other.

  • article on Jul 27, 2011

    yu vry well said love doctor … i agree with you…:)))

  • Joe Ram on Jul 27, 2011

    interesting.

  • kirti on Jul 28, 2011

    very true…a nice one

  • article on Jul 28, 2011

    thanx alot joe ram …:))))

  • article on Jul 28, 2011

    thanx alot kirti …:)))))

  • PartizAnka on Jul 28, 2011

    Very nice story… This really teach us not to make fast desicions. And great idea! I’m beginning to think to do the same with the deposits and remarkable events)

  • Martin Kloess on Jul 29, 2011

    very good.

  • article on Jul 29, 2011

    hey thanx alot .. partizanka …. :) )))))
    yup its an interesting way to count ur happiness …. :) )))

  • article on Jul 29, 2011

    thanx alot martin ….:))))))

  • ladym33 on Aug 5, 2011

    Very nice story.

  • ittech on Aug 13, 2011

    nice thanks

  • mikie2000 on Sep 1, 2011

    Beautiful story. Amazing, just one question, where are you gone? Well, I don’t really mind :P What I meant was please say your not gone. Your one of my favorite writers.

  • Sneha... on Nov 6, 2011

    awwwwwww……..how sweet… Loved this story!!

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