Think of your poor old attic especially at this time of year.
Here is a poem- a joint effort between myself and BB2010.
Thank you BB2010 for your contribution.

My Attic Plea

Oh no, not another large cardboard box,
Filled with books, china or broken clocks.
I am not an infinite space to store,
The cast-offs that you don’t need any more.

Wires, plugs and cassettes stuffed in crates,
A case filled with toys and roller skates.
A wine-making kit, still to be used,
There’s bottles, clothes and plenty of shoes.

Quite soon you’ll be here to take from me,
Baubles and tinsel, the old Christmas tree.
So listen right now to my attic plea,
“Take the rest please- and don’t crowd me!”

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  • BB2010 on Nov 27, 2009

    Lovely. Such fun!

  • Betty on Nov 27, 2009

    I love that your attic is able to have such sophisticated thoughts!
    –Betty :)

  • richardpeeej on Nov 28, 2009

    Thanks BB-it was great doing a poem together wasn’t it.

    Thanks Betty, glad you liked it-have a good holiday!

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