Here’s a poem I just wrote while online about my baby niece, Aisha who I saw for the first time just the mid of last month but she already has my heart inside her…

My baby, my little princess,

I think of you as an angel in disguise,

Sweetheart, whether you believe it or not,

In yourself you carry my life.

Every time, after you yawn,

The “ack-hmmm” noise that you make,

Touches me so wildly,

Gives my heart a vigorous shake.

You don’t know how it troubles me,

Every time that you cry out loud,

The sorrow, the pain,

It makes me wish I was already in my shroud.

Whenever I carry you,

And look into your angelic eyes,

There’s just one thing I can think of,

Could anyone be so nice??

Your little feet, your little hands,

Everything about you I love.

I have to be so careful when touching you,

You are my little, delicate dove.

Seeing you in your little pool,

When you are getting your daily bath,

Takes me to anohter dimension,

Away from all the worldly wrath.

How you suck my clothes when you are in my arms,

And the way you catch hold of my hair,

Are just gifts from God,

Babies like you are very rare.

I keep you from others’ evil eyes,

Though, you, I want all the world to see.

But baby, you were born fourteen years ago,

Because, you actually live within me… :)

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  • Joseph Scott on Aug 2, 2010

    Beautiful.. babies are what life’s all about. I can tell you’ll be a great mother (which the world needs more of), when the time comes. Great share!

  • Raj the Tora on Aug 2, 2010

    Excellent. Our whole lives are dedicated for the babies – next generation. You have superbly captured the feelings that we have with babies around.

  • PARAM on Aug 2, 2010

    Brilliant work…..lovely lines.

  • rajaryanme on Aug 2, 2010

    Once again a good entry.

  • wonder on Aug 2, 2010

    A cuddly entry, I get the feel of your baby.

  • Divakar Narayan on Aug 2, 2010

    Cute one Bushra!!

  • sasuke191 on Aug 2, 2010

    Thanks all!!!…. ^^

  • princessFizza on Aug 2, 2010

    thank you sasuke… i love my baby too….

  • sasuke191 on Aug 2, 2010

    @princessfizza.. Everyone does… She\’s an angel!!!… ^^

  • Atanacio on Aug 2, 2010

    very well written

  • ashucharu on Aug 2, 2010

    touching and sweet :) great share

  • Rhodora Bande on Aug 2, 2010

    Sweet. :-)

  • FaceOff on Aug 2, 2010

    nice

  • Shamyl on Aug 2, 2010

    Lovely poem !!

  • LoveDoctor on Aug 2, 2010

    Beautiful and expressive poem

  • webseowriters on Aug 2, 2010

    lovely lines

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Aug 2, 2010

    Beautiful poem with a surprise ending.

  • CC23 on Aug 2, 2010

    sweet! can i just be your baby? =)

  • BRENDAKSHELTON on Aug 3, 2010

    Beautiful peom. Loved it!!!!!

  • giftarist on Aug 3, 2010

    Lovely work. Liked it!

  • Starpisces on Aug 3, 2010

    very lovely poem. While reading, the image of a cute baby flashes in my mind… as lovely as the author of this poem.

  • papaleng on Aug 3, 2010

    Cute and sweet! Babies always bring laughter.

  • sasuke191 on Aug 3, 2010

    Thanks all!!!!….. I just love all these comments!!.. ^^

  • Mifra Khan on Aug 3, 2010

    OMG!! this is all true!!!! i m soo lucky!! i hav actually seen her!!!

  • alxymy on Aug 3, 2010

    that was awesome.

  • sasuke191 on Aug 4, 2010

    Thanks!!..
    @Mifra Khan.. yeah, Muffin.. You have seen her!.. :)

  • Yuan Lee on Aug 19, 2010

    Wow!! You love your little niece so much! God bless her! :)

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