I wrote this poem for my father because thanks to him I am excelling in basketball: Without him I wouldn’t be the same.

My dad told me I’d be great
That I would have a great basketball fate
He told me to be the best i could be
To play like the original me

When I usually fall
But I get up and run to the ball
Sometimes I fall on my face
But I get up and down the court I race

I am really obsessed with basketball
It’s my greatest love of all
I am so good there is no cure
Thanks to my dad my game is pure

When my dad was younger his game was grand
He wasn’t just another grain of sand
He wasn’t just another fish in the sea
He was a natural protegy

If you have paid attention you will see
That his skills are coming from him to me
I’m not going to let his dream of me fall
I’m gonna play some true basketball

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  • gisselle on Apr 9, 2008

    what is the name of the poem

  • Brit Brit on Apr 9, 2009

    This poem is great it remaids me of myself but with my mom unsted of my dad!! i love basketball its my favorite sport and at my high shool i play shoot guard just like my fav bball player DIONTE CHRISTMAS! He helps me go throw with the game of basketball and I think he is a great person and my hero!!!!

  • Quanesia on May 2, 2009

    i love diz poem and it was true about mii mom and mii dad but ill pick mii mom cuz she has done a great job all through life!!!!

  • Samantha on May 6, 2009

    i luv dis poem so much it really connects to me and what i want to do when i grow up. My mom and dad tell me the same thing everyday i have a basketball game……..it was great.

  • samantha on May 6, 2009

    i wrote this under the wrong poem sry…

  • bob on May 29, 2009

    your poem suck ckrum gizzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • ckrum on May 29, 2009

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    in my pants

  • Aaliyah on Oct 22, 2009

    This is so freakn awsme

    Keep rockn and writing

    Love
    Aaliyah

  • jack on Oct 28, 2009

    nice poem man
    needs some touchups though

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