My Beautiful You

richard reed on Jun 6, 2009

Tags: beautiful, seduced

Seeing her beauty…

Beautiful you,
I would devour your beauty
to taste and digest
your essence of soul
feel your heart beat
caress it with these gentle hands
as if it were my mp3 player
repeating my favorite song
I sit and listen
keep hope alive
yet look to see if
there is anything missing
my curious thoughts
are ready to burst
like a chilled bottle of champagne
let me breathe..
let me taste the bubbling moments of joy
that seduced me in this position
of wanting nothing less then serving you
all of you
my Beautiful You….

9
Liked it

I Like It

Comments (13)

George W Whitehead on Jun 6, 2009
Another lovely poem, Richard.
California Dreamer on Jun 6, 2009
Very nice indeed
Pinaki Ghosh on Jun 6, 2009
Use of music player instead of mp3 would give better sonorous effect, I think.
Darla Cooke on Jun 6, 2009
Lovely poem.
Lostash on Jun 6, 2009
I like the mp3 reference….keeps it contemporary and relevant. Good as usual Richard.
Timothy P Stavert on Jun 6, 2009
That quenched my thirst Richard

Good Poem

Tim
QuinMonty86 on Jun 6, 2009
Really shows the want and desire…..very nice.
Princess Dre on Jun 6, 2009
very nice writing- good comparisons – God Bless – Princess
Kaavs on Jun 6, 2009
Lucky ~her~ you are referring to!
Toni Love on Jun 7, 2009
Great job…..the extra touch
THE MP3 PLAYER. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
YOUR FRIEND
MARIA
rutherfranc on Jun 7, 2009
that would make the recepient of this piece melt.. in puddles at your feet..
nekkoli on Jun 7, 2009
I would melt in puddles at your feet……lol, great d@m poetry!
Mrs M on Jun 9, 2009
Awww……..lovely of course!

My Beautiful You

Hi there!

Find the Spot

Categories