Poem about surfing the ocean blue….

Oh its here I want to be, just my board and me,

and the beautiful blue sea, along with my lovely daddy…

Where the waters are cool, against my little body,

on the waves I will rule, with my favorite hobby…

The big waves I’ll surf, and the little ones too,

this is my turf, on the ocean of blue…

Feel the sun on my back, the salty waters I taste,

at my thighs it laps, I paddle with haste…

I balance on my board, and glide to the beach, 

with a yell and a screech, on the waves I’ve soared…

With the wind in my hair,and with ease and care,

I surf everywhere, and my dad just stares…

Oh its here I want to be, the memories I’ve gained,

just my board and the sea, I will come back again……….end

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Comments (10)
  • ceegirl on Dec 30, 2009

    What a surfer your are. Great

  • Valerie Curtiss on Dec 30, 2009

    Cool poem, cute kid.

  • standingproud on Dec 30, 2009

    The ocean of blue,you and me is just splendid indeed.

  • Val Mills on Dec 30, 2009

    Wonderful, brings back memories. I am certainly missing summer in our neck of the woods this year. Haven’t been to the beach since whitebaiting season.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 31, 2009

    A lovely reminder of your surfing days. I love the sea but prefer to look at it from land, lol.

    Christine

  • albert1jemi on Dec 31, 2009

    thats so beautiful peom

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 31, 2009

    Great poem!

  • Frances Lawrence on Dec 31, 2009

    I love this poem, it brings back so many happy memories

  • fashion girl on Jan 7, 2010

    Beautifully illustrated…

  • Hettie on Jan 9, 2010

    though surfings not for me a horse ride along the beach in the early morning is more my cup of tea and maybe the horse and I would take a dip in the sea. but is does bring back memories thanks.

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