My Ceiling Fan

carissimi on Aug 18, 2010

Tags: carissimi, ceiling fan, merry-go-round

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Ceiling fan…

my ceiling fan

it just keeps spinning

on the ceiling

round and round it be

I swear sometimes it tries to annoy me

almost makes me want to jump and grab it

wonder what kind of ride would it be?

perhaps like the children’s merry go round?

maybe like the yo-yo swings at fair ground?

or would it all come tumbling down

making my arse hurt?

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Comments (18)

Sharif Ishnin on Aug 18, 2010
Hahaha! Please don’t try it at home.
Eunice Tan on Aug 18, 2010
Nice poem. Make us happy.
PARAM on Aug 19, 2010
Lovely poem…………i like it.
Christine Ramsay on Aug 19, 2010
I wish I had a ceiling fan. It gets so hot at night. Ireally enjoyed the poem.

Christine
Phoenix Montoya on Aug 19, 2010
Cool poem. Fans are like that annoying when very noisy, then again there is always the heat. I guess better tolerate them lol
Marie Milton on Aug 19, 2010
You could write a poem about anything )
Ranjan Mathews on Aug 19, 2010
Spinning fans
Swinging fans
Going by rote
Doesn’t get my goat.
GodsGrace on Aug 19, 2010
Wonderful Poem
Likha on Aug 19, 2010
I prefer the noise than the whole fan falling on me. Yup, it has happened. Nice one.
Starpisces on Aug 19, 2010
very cute poem, let’s form one fun club…
Atanacio on Aug 19, 2010
another good entry
Abhipray Sahoo on Aug 19, 2010
Hahaha! Nice poem!
rebell115 on Aug 19, 2010
nice poem good job
giftarist on Aug 19, 2010
Fascinating. Nice piece.
sandcastle on Aug 20, 2010
Cleverly written.I like it1
valli on Aug 20, 2010
Good poetry.
Jswana on Aug 21, 2010
Very cute and original and poetic. I got a mental picture as I read it and giggled with it.
1hopefulman on Aug 27, 2010
LOL I’d leave it alone and just write poems about it.

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