A poem to my father on Father’s Day. I love you Dad!

I am a fortunate One,
Blessed by birth.

My father has made an impact
With silence and with care,
Through deep set
Sharp blue eyes,

Teaching me how to read
The dictionary,
The right way.
He emphasizes
the manner in which
he speaks
My mother’s name,
Anne.

He found something new,
a definition for me,
And told her,
He knew it would dawn on me
eventually.

And soon I’d recognize,
My own authentic voice,
In language to portray,
These past years
of remembering.
How to expand thought,
And lengthen into idea.

I listened to him,
As I held tight to another,
blinded by the sun,
out in left field.
Thinking proudly,
Daddy will praise me,
no matter what.

Even when he heard me yell,
and saw me kick away,
Wanting to be free,
As a bird.
His patience never swayed,

Perhaps because he knew
I’d soon return to be,
An eloquent woman someday.

Through change
and change again,
On my own,
Constantly creating something new,
As an eternal spirit through
and through.

And as I look inside,
My heart knows 
Who I am.
Still to this day,
My Daddy’s Girl.

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Comments (8)
  • DakaSky on Jun 21, 2009

    You are on fire Nisa. Love it. Simply beautiful.

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 22, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • papaleng on Jun 22, 2009

    nice poem and a great tribute to a dad.

  • GilvonnaCmurph on Jun 22, 2009

    I enjoyed this, and Im a Daddys girl!

  • fairyfallsdead on Jun 25, 2009

    I need to go see my daddy soon… Another masterpiece!

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Jul 4, 2009

    I really think this is a beautiful to dad, to remind him how much he’s really worth. really touching!!! loved it.

  • PhoenixRox on Jul 18, 2009

    I just loved the poem especially the following lines-
    Even when he heard me yell,
    and saw me kick away,
    Wanting to be free,
    As a bird.
    His patience never swayed,

    Wonderful work Nisa!!

    Regards,
    Phoenix. :)

  • Katie Marie on Aug 13, 2009

    This was truly wonderful. A great tribute to an obviously wonderful father.

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