Missing someone special.

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What happened to my dearest friend?

We had a bond that was special and true.

I used to tell him my darkest secrets.

Now I’m left with no one to talk to.

 

I confided in him nearly every day.

He would listen with a patient heart.

Then one day he suddenly had to leave.

I feel so alone now that we’re apart.

 

What little time that we had together,

we never wanted to share with another.

We spent those very precious moments,

confessing our true feelings to each other.

 

I eagerly await the day of his return,

for I know he will come back to me.

I long to feel his passionate embrace.

In his arms is where I yearn to be.

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  • Dark Antirex on Nov 20, 2009

    nice poem

  • Lee Ness on Nov 20, 2009

    Very nice and sad poem. How true though about missing someone.
    Thank you for a lovely poem
    Lee Ness

  • livemike on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice work..Perfect infact…Well done..

  • Petalm on Nov 20, 2009

    Great work.

  • aunslaught on Nov 20, 2009

    good structure!!!!!!!!!! Nice placements and a cute, simple little poem.

  • ken bultman on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice poem. Sounds like more than a friend.

  • K.Reshma on Nov 20, 2009

    Very nice

  • drelayaraja on Nov 20, 2009

    Very well composed. great flow.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice write, I liked.

  • Linda Lori on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice poem, Darla.

  • ashan1614 on Nov 20, 2009

    I’m going to have to agree with Ken. Sounds like MUCH more than a friend. Nice write, Darla!

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 20, 2009

    Nicely expressed words. I hope you get your wish.

    Christine

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 20, 2009

    Nicely expressed words. I hope you get your wish.

    Christine

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 20, 2009

    the more we read u

    the more we love u

    we are also ur friends

    waiting on you

    lovely

  • Starpisces on Nov 20, 2009

    touching poem

  • Goodselfme on Nov 20, 2009

    Very preciously written poem with great selection of messages there in. Well done, my friend.

  • svishnugopal on Nov 20, 2009

    very sad emotions filled with and it is lovely to read…

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Nov 20, 2009

    A touching one. Excellent choice of words.

  • Ramalingam on Nov 20, 2009

    I wish that you will meet your friend soon.Thank you

  • lillyrose on Nov 20, 2009

    that was beautiful, I loved it.

  • martinpm on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice poem.

  • Sourav on Nov 20, 2009

    Nicely written!

  • Themax on Nov 20, 2009

    well done very nice poem,Thanks :)

  • Teves on Nov 20, 2009

    Very true…
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  • ReggieLutz on Nov 20, 2009

    very sweet

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 20, 2009

    sometimes waiting is so sweet

  • petercurtis97 on Nov 21, 2009

    very nice poem hope it works out well for you soon.

  • Hansika on Nov 21, 2009

    wonderful…

  • spiritualgrace30 on Nov 21, 2009

    so sad and yet so beautiful!

  • Papa Sparks on Nov 21, 2009

    Very touching and bittersweet

  • deep blue on Nov 21, 2009

    Well written and definitely rhymes.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 21, 2009

    Wonderful flow to this very lovely poem!

  • Aiyanna on Nov 22, 2009

    Lovely poem!!! Touched me personally as I am going through a phase like this right now… :-)

  • STEVE666 on Nov 23, 2009

    Beautiful poem, Darla.

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