Then I looked down on you, as you were caressed in my arms…

Yesterday I could only visualize what it would be like to be complete
then I looked down on you as you were caressed in my arms
and realized I was  the day we met,
I was involved in a dream that had me from sight
living in a world of vision longing for tomorrows surprise
I had all i needed in front of me
I had you,
my today,my tomorrow,my every days
I hold my controlled destiny
I hold you,my everything

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  • katarina giselle on Jan 13, 2009

    This is BEAUTIFUL! I really feel what your expressing..its amazing

  • Karen Gross on Jan 30, 2009

    Very precious! I think you are writing about a spouse or lover, but it made me think of the first times I held my babies.

  • katarina giselle on Jan 7, 2011

    I just had to read this again..so purely GOOD. I want someone to feel that way about me again..I miss that!

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