Dedicated to yummy love…..

You are the one living next to me.

You stepped in my life

from hopeless place.

I don’t know as we were friends

time made me to feel the sweetness of love.

Dawn and dusk,you ride on

till the next midnight to twilight

Feeling so emotive that

tends me to have your glimpse.

Cried to spit out buried venom

in casket of my chest.

Once we were in thirsty dark room

we hanged together for couple of beatific time.

You didn’t show erotic love

and that is best thing in you.

Every time, signals rise in breeze

you catch them but I find you busy.

As the days passed I felt something in you,

I thought you would shoulder me

never know that I have to hold you.

Encouraged you to fly on the wings of time

I like all the feelings you bring to me

and I am not sure they will remain with me or not.

In front of my fate I beg on knees

to lead me to you and may never break your heart.

I have nothing that can repay you back

but just three words I LOVE YOU.

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  • Angelji on Jun 17, 2012

    This poem made me happy..Am happy that you’re happy now..go for that girl..

  • Aroosa Hermosa on Jun 17, 2012

    No dear it’s imaginary.I am same the way I was :( and cry over it.

  • AINIEE on Jun 17, 2012

    the poem really made me happy too as angelji.. but your comment made me sad again//…………:-(

  • AmosTheCat on Jun 17, 2012

    If it is imaginary then at least you dare to imagine it and express it in such a beautiful way. You are growing so fast as a poet. Like my daughters did, you are growing up right before our eyes. It is beautiful to see a person develop their talant and personality. It is one of the great benefits of being an educator.
    This is a beautiful poem that’s evokes such strong feelings about love and how it should be. It is what we all hope to attain but so few of us ever do.

  • Aroosa Hermosa on Jun 17, 2012

    @AINEE I was also happy to write this but soon I was disappointed.@AmosTheCat thankx honey :)

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Jun 17, 2012

    You will find someone as you are young and special.

  • nurzaira on Jun 17, 2012

    beautiful poem, I hope you can feel happy like your imagination

  • Aroosa Hermosa on Jun 17, 2012

    Hye everybody it’s just imaginary and fantasy poem which flows for own relief.I think love has it’s own taste so that is why I referred that “Dedicated to yummy love”.Love is delicious and I have directed for it.Don’t take it as real.THANKS

  • lauralu on Jun 17, 2012

    I hope you find your yummy one day God bless

  • Lorna Z on Jun 17, 2012

    sweet and lovely… wish you will find your yummy ASAP :)

  • RemieRyan on Jun 18, 2012

    Yummy…connotes something very obtrusive. Haha I’m thinking of bug muscle man with pumped up muscles like that of Mr. Arnold Szchwarewhatever! haha very nice poem. I like it much!

  • Aroosa Hermosa on Jun 18, 2012

    @RemieRyan lol yeah right hahha

  • Rahmat Syam on Jun 18, 2012

    beautiful..Keep spirit!! :)

  • tonyleather on Jun 18, 2012

    Excellent as usual Aroosa. Well Done.

  • luthvy on Jun 18, 2012

    nice aroosa… like it, , , hahahhha god job

  • lonelyplanet on Jun 18, 2012

    the poem really made me happy too as angelji.. but your comment made me sad again

  • Ixodoi on Jun 18, 2012

    When I first read it – I was happy you finally found a worthy person. Then I read your comment and it made me sad again. Yet, I understand there is still hope inside of you, and I’ll hang out on that. I’ll continue to pray for you dear. Don’t loss hope!

  • Sunjhini on Jun 18, 2012

    beautifull expressed

  • KittyK on Jun 18, 2012

    Such a great, moving story of love…

  • momofplenty on Jun 18, 2012

    It is quite lovely dear, the hope of love always makes great poetry.

  • misterdd on Jun 18, 2012

    great poem aroosa. top of the top. very nice. i like

  • Eiddwen on Jun 18, 2012

    What a brilliant poem ;thank you so much for sharing.
    Eddy.

  • Buzz J on Jun 18, 2012

    Sweet and lovely, dear Angel.

    Loved the lines. Well-done!

  • girishpuri on Jun 18, 2012

    There is no market for your emotions,
    so never advertise your feelings,
    just show your ATTITUDE…

    very well framed poem, keep writing

  • erwinkennythomas on Jun 18, 2012

    Fascinating and down right touching! Someone of your dreams seems on your horizon.

  • Aroosa Hermosa on Jun 18, 2012

    @girishphuri some great philosopher said this,There is no market for your emotions,
    so never advertise your feelings,

    but I have my own philosophy.There is market for your emotions and that is your heart through it you can advertise but alas no one understands.Nobody, gets my heart.what it want :(

  • James Solomianik on Jun 18, 2012

    This poem reminds me when you’re in love
    A very beautiful poem

  • gwezsetyo on Jun 19, 2012

    :)

  • Martin Kloess on Jun 19, 2012

    Thank you for this.

  • xphantoms on Jun 19, 2012

    Thank you, like image

  • shopamarwah on Jun 20, 2012

    Such a great poem,i like image too…

  • Mariooh on Jun 20, 2012

    Nice article and please go through my article too :
    http://gomestic.com/family/losers-are-winners

  • Hakarus on Jun 20, 2012

    hye who is that lucky one

  • Riifky on Jun 20, 2012

    nice poem :D

  • Riifky on Jun 20, 2012

    nice poem :D

  • realityspeaks on Jun 20, 2012

    Beautiful

  • sam33 on Jun 21, 2012

    If you say love is yummy then this poem is sweet :)

  • wren frost on Jun 21, 2012

    Oh the bittersweet taste of requited love, beautiful piece I hope they feel the same way about you.

  • vickylass on Jun 21, 2012

    I was moved on read it! Excelent one Aroosa!

  • JMorgan071 on Jun 21, 2012

    Your style of writing is excellent, love it!

  • Data01012011 on Jun 21, 2012

    good job :D

  • shefaliarora on Jun 22, 2012

    You are growing so fast as a poet. Like my daughters did, you are growing up right before our eyes. It is beautiful to see a person develop their talant and personality. It is one of the great benefits of being an educator.

  • trionny on Jun 22, 2012

    great poem and pictures! i always like your pics, aroosa!

  • Christina Noll on Jun 23, 2012

    a hope for the future! <3

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 23, 2012

    That’s very sweet.

  • elee on Jul 19, 2012

    nice and good

  • The Virtual Workers on Aug 4, 2012

    Got happy but never knew it was imaginery until I read your comment keep it up yaara bye

  • The Virtual Workers on Aug 4, 2012

    Got happy but never knew it was imaginery until I read your comment keep it up yaara bye.

  • septana on Aug 7, 2012

    very nice article :)

  • septana on Nov 20, 2012

    very good article and provide benefits to all

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