My Dream

Joni Keith on Jan 29, 2009

Tags: dream, Haiku, psychology, sleep, social sciences

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I dream of you.

At night as you sleep,
I watch you, lost in your dreams,
for you are my dream.

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Comments (21)

Christine Ramsay on Jan 29, 2009
That is so romantic and beautiful. Well done

Christine
papaleng on Jan 29, 2009
short but romantic.
Betty Carew on Jan 29, 2009
Very beautiful Joni
rutherfranc on Jan 29, 2009
I was kind of expecting some more, but guess you woke up already.. very romantic
Bo Russo on Jan 29, 2009
Joni,that was awesome!!!It was short and sweet and I knew it complete when I wore a younger man’s clothes.(Billy Joel)
jmichelsen on Jan 29, 2009
very nice, photography and poetry
denus on Jan 29, 2009
Simply elegant and great,

the picture is brillint,

and once again joni shines!!
Bick Parker on Jan 30, 2009
Very thought-provoking. Yet another wonderful piece.
Inna Tysoe on Jan 30, 2009
That is so romantic!

Inna
gianne on Jan 30, 2009
It’s beautiful…serene.
AC Hamilton III on Jan 30, 2009
What can I say! Excellence!

AC
Bo Russo on Jan 30, 2009
Joni,I liked it even better the second time.
Gayle Hamilton on Jan 30, 2009
Simply dreamy…vey nice.
eddiego65 on Jan 31, 2009
Sweet!
Sandra Tapia on Jan 31, 2009
The depth of this piece leaves me lost in thought. Excellent Haiku!
Denise Kawaii on Jan 31, 2009
I love this. It is like a silent, private thought as you look upon a sleeping lover.
Joie Schmidt on Feb 1, 2009
Soft and beautiful*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
mysticdave on Feb 2, 2009
Simple and very sweet, i enjoyed it.
Melody SJAL on Feb 2, 2009
Brilliant and lovely!
Erin Cree on Mar 1, 2009
I love this HAIKU
kate smedley on Mar 20, 2009
That’s beautiful Joni.

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