My Elephant

zulfiqarali5 on Oct 22, 2010

Tags: business, car, desert, drive, earn, elephant, fast, fit, formula 1, four wheel, glass, hazard, Hummer, money, Plant, race course, road, sit, sugar, triond, truck, water, wheel

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I have a hummer

drive so fast

hate to be in last

crush everything

feel no bring

even in desert

don,t follow hazard

i have best in class

keep in eye

evey glass

sit in it fit

hand on wheel

move where ever i want

can,t see any sugar plant

because i have hummer

not MY Elephant

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Comments (14)

Dragoonk on Oct 22, 2010
Do you really have a Hummer?lol
sareenkhan on Oct 22, 2010
yes a hand play lolzzzzzzzzzzzz
sareenkhan on Oct 22, 2010
a toy !
Sweety on Oct 22, 2010
Great share!
The Soul Explorer on Oct 22, 2010
Funny!
Michal Dorcak on Oct 23, 2010
nice poem.
cathyjones on Oct 23, 2010
Nice…….
clandestinef on Oct 23, 2010
Good to know…
Sunjhini on Oct 23, 2010
well written
Raj the Tora on Oct 23, 2010
nice
kazmi424 on Oct 23, 2010
lols
Adrn0919 on Oct 23, 2010
cute poem.
zulfiqarali5 on Oct 23, 2010
thanks !
Akiong on Oct 25, 2010
Interesting.

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