My Elisha

Phoenix Montoya on Oct 2, 2010

Tags: dark poem, elisha, horror poem, love poem

Dark, eternal love.

Image by kreg.steppe

You lay sleeping, my Elisha.

How your serenity touches me.

Mine for all eternity-

your heart, your body.

Made for each other my dear.

My lips for your kiss,

your face for my eyes.

Forever, my Elisha.

You had been blinded to see,

to refuse my love.

My utmost remorse,

but to strike your heart… a must!

Rest now my Elisha, my love.

We shall live together, forever.

Your cold body in my couch,

your heart… in my jar.

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Allison Jae on Oct 2, 2010
Ooohhhh!!!!! This is creepy, but good. You should think about writing a short story or a novel based on this.
drelayaraja on Oct 2, 2010
Lovely poem…
Jimmy Shilaho on Oct 3, 2010
A sad ending but I can see the hope behind your words.
Joseph Scott on Oct 3, 2010
Very creep indeed! I liked it
Kaye TM on Oct 3, 2010
nice cool creepy poem. shivers down my spine.=p
NIYATI BHAT on Oct 3, 2010
Oh.. what a tragic ending..I really loved this poem..n I love the simplicity with which Elisha has been potrayed..Beautiful!
zulfiqarali5 on Oct 3, 2010
Thanks for share . nice informative material !
krrymarie on Oct 3, 2010
lovely poem! sad ending though but still lovely to read
BC Doan on Oct 4, 2010
Lovely beginning and the end was kind of chilling..Just wonderful, Phoenix!
Anuradha Ramkumar on Oct 5, 2010
Very creepy indeed.
CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 5, 2010
Touching and lovely poem. Write more, you are talented!
Likha on Oct 6, 2010
Goose bumps but great write phoenix.
Tulan on Oct 7, 2010
ohhhhhhhh, creepy crawly,
Goodselfme on Oct 7, 2010
These words are well chosen to bring about the feel of this poem. It almost has a sad feeling with hurt and love all together.
mkd1788 on Oct 7, 2010
beautiful post…with nice image..
mkd1788 on Oct 7, 2010
beautifil post…with nice image..
johnnydod on Oct 7, 2010
Love it love it love it wow so good xx
nobert soloria bermosa on Oct 7, 2010
cool…
Angela Faith on Oct 7, 2010
At first I thought poignant and just as quickly I thought no….your words are very deliberately laced into the tragic ending. Well composed.
Ubel Ein on Oct 7, 2010
Dark… I like It!!
Neva Flores on Oct 7, 2010
Excellent and dark! Wow!
papaleng on Oct 10, 2010
good Halloween poem, ^-^…
yes me on Oct 19, 2010
LIKED THIS CHEERS
revivor on Oct 22, 2010
agreed with above!! This has lovely rhythm, emotive words and, of course, a great ending!! nice work!!
CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 22, 2011
This is a true, ever-lasting love. It is sacred and pure.

My Elisha

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