My Everlasting Love

diamondpoet on Nov 4, 2009

Some people really do have good relationships.

Let the fire burn bright

and keep us together.

Let our love remain strong,

forever and ever.

We exist as one.

Tragedies we face together,

and never run.We are lovers always

forever and a day.

We came, we saw, we conquered.

Our love will remain anchored.

Being next to you is not enough.

I lye here and shiver,

waiting to be touched.

But first you are my friend.

Someone on who I can depend.

That’s how this all began.

An ear for me you would lend.

Make this last forever.

Trials and tribulations we may weather.

I need you so much.

We will love each other

and never let anyone break us up.

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Comments (15)

ashan1614 on Nov 4, 2009
This is exactly how it should be – friends and lovers; two as one. Great write!
Themax on Nov 4, 2009
Love started form friendship,Thanks:)
Valerie Curtiss on Nov 4, 2009
Great poem, but “lie” here, is the right word, not lye, that is a caustic substance made from wood ashes. A great web site for anyone who needs help choosing the right word, past or present, etc. is http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com Hope this helps
It is given with love.
alc on Nov 4, 2009
Great write! Thanks for the share!
martinpm on Nov 4, 2009
Very nice poem.
Darla Cooke on Nov 4, 2009
Lovely poem!
Shamanz on Nov 4, 2009
aww that’s lovely!
raptor22 on Nov 4, 2009
Lovely poem written from the heart.
Snooky on Nov 4, 2009
Hip Hip Hooray If you got a good relationship do all that you can to keep it that way
Joe Dorish on Nov 4, 2009
Very nice and heartwarming poem.
Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 4, 2009
very nicely done!
Maxthevir on Nov 4, 2009
Very sweet! I wish koalas were everlasting.
Aiyanna on Nov 4, 2009
Lovely message from the heart!!! Thank you for sharing it…
giftarist on Nov 5, 2009
Simply wonderful..Great work!
TroostAvenue on Nov 10, 2009
The message is fine but it doesn’t flow quite right to my ear. Maybe is just the way Triond has forced the arrangement.

Hi there!