My Fantasy

Darla Cooke on Jan 24, 2009

Tags: barefoot, Dreams, fantasy, full moon, kiss, man, moonlight, poem, Poetry, sand, sea, Shore, starry night, strolling, tropical, vacation

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My tropical fantasy.

Going away on a tropical vacation

has become my biggest fantasy.

I will stroll barefoot in the cool sand,

while gazing upon the vast blue sea.

I will meet the man of my dreams,

kiss him beneath the bright moonlight.

We will stroll along the shore hand in hand,

enjoying the full moon and starry night.

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Comments (12)

Sincere on Jan 24, 2009
Great poem. I really liked it keep up the great work
Michele Cameron Drew on Jan 24, 2009
This is quite the dream
Izzy Daniels on Jan 24, 2009
it is a nice poem. Good job
denus on Jan 24, 2009
mm tropical vacation sounds good!
Alicia Wind on Jan 24, 2009
dreaming of hot sun would do good if uur in the winter pouring snow!
Milton H Peebles III on Jan 24, 2009
even though beach sand gets everywhere ~ I would love to spend time on a tropical beach.
five StArS!!!!!
AC Hamilton III on Jan 24, 2009
Yes, one day I will retire in the Tropics.

AC
Westbrook on Jan 25, 2009
That would be great to meet the person of your dreams.
cardy on Jan 25, 2009
Want to feel the sand on my toes right now.
ChristopherJG on Jan 25, 2009
There seems to be a little sadness in your poems, but also a hint of optimism.
Elvin Dilone on Jan 28, 2009
well done, this is a nice and romantic way to meet the men of your dreams.
livemike on Jan 28, 2009
great fantasy and so possible..

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