What I like.

After all these years
quicksilver moods
recriminations
finger pointing
laughter
caresses
blessings
depressions
false alarms
false positives
sinning and
forgiving
and touching
our skins touching
bliss and kisses
my favorite thing
is still
talking
just talking
with you
in a conversation
that never ends

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  • Jo Oliver on May 31, 2009

    :)

  • Anne McNew on Jun 1, 2009

    oh well… thanks

  • Inna Tysoe on Jun 1, 2009

    That was quite good.

    Inna

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 1, 2009

    There is nothing like being able to really talk to someone.

    Christine

  • Darla Smith on Jun 1, 2009

    It is nice to sometimes just talk.

  • Betty Carew on Jun 1, 2009

    One of the many ways to win someones heart . Nice poem John

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 3, 2009

    That’s just lovely, so nicely written and a great flow to it.

  • rizzei on Jun 11, 2009

    talking..yeah that’s simply amazing:)

  • Hazel Crowther on Jun 29, 2009

    I like this poem, made me say ‘ah’. Thankyou.

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