This poem is basically about how I personally feel about hate.

 Hate feels like a disease that can’t be cured

It feels like AIDS eating you from the inside

and skin caner eating you from the outside.

It makes you feels like you’re trapped in a dark place

 screaming for help but no one hears you.

It makes you feel like you’re lost in the woods

and there’s no way out.

It feels like your whole insides are on fire and no one

notice it but you because you keep it bottled up like your

drinking a cup of hot sauce and eating a spoon full of peppers.

As you keep it bottled in, it feels like someone is choking you

but you can’t turn a loose so you lose all your strength

and can no longer fight back.

Next thing you know, hatred has taken over your body.

Your whole life is lost because of it.

When you look in the mirror you don’t see yourself you see

a whole new personality that you never thought you’d have.

Not only you notice it but the people around you will notice it too

so they stay away from you because you’ve turned from  a sweet person

to this evil ugly monster.

Now I’ve already told you my feelings about hate

now it’s your turn to tell me your feelings about hate.

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  • kacegielski on Oct 8, 2009

    Hate does consume you. I wish I could get over the hate I feel for my soon to be ex. If I could do that then I’s stop being so angry. Good job!!!!!!!!!

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