Good night all
excuse the delay of this aircraft.

night wore on
become increasingly soluble
lean
stand
sit
transfixed

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lethargic

dreamy eyes
calculate the lines in the ceiling
one two three … endless
suddenly
rang the bell sound

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‘ting tong ting tong “
all be readily
two two-lined
sour faces shining again
fatigue is gone
back a glimmer of hope
down the halls
through the empty spaces
open field
cold night air nan
hit the faces in the silent
good night all
excuse the delay of this aircraft
and hopefully good-bye until the goal
…. finally …

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  • voodoobrb on Mar 23, 2011

    Good post, great writing

  • V rank on Mar 23, 2011

    At least you were fruitful…

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 23, 2011

    Excellent writing

  • The Soul Explorer on Mar 24, 2011

    Great!

  • eaa1118 on Aug 18, 2011

    Your starting lines served as your endlines–I like that:-) Share some more:-)

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