A poem about my soul.

There is an unexplainable thing within me, located deep inside,

A thing which no one looks for, yet it does not hide.

This thing contains my thoughts, my each and every goal,

It keeps me healthy and alive, it is my soul, it is my soul.

It is my life, it is my death, it is my very being,

Without it there is no fun, no pleasure, no pain or seeing.

It lives in me, it is me, with it I am whole,

It is a great blessing, it is my soul, it is my soul.

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This is is my living, this is my after-life, I cannot part with it,

My body is useless, so is my heart, it’s just a bottomless pit,

The real thing, which is really me, is my deep and lively soul,

It has a name, it is called “Aun”, it is my soul, it is my soul.

Aun Muhammad.

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  • drelayaraja on Nov 21, 2009

    Great poem Aun. I liked it. Very fresh ideas.

  • aunslaught on Nov 21, 2009

    Thank you, man!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 21, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Themax on Nov 21, 2009

    lovely,thanks!

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 21, 2009

    Without a soul we are lifeless, walking bodies. With a soul we are a little more than just human.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 22, 2009

    An inspiring piece. You have put your soul into your writing. Well done.

    Christine

  • aunslaught on Nov 22, 2009

    Thanks a lot guys.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 22, 2009

    Loved it. Our soul or spirit is our everything.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 26, 2009

    Very Lovely …Liked your write…Thanks Aun

  • xoxo on Dec 1, 2009

    Good poem with such unique topic. Thanks.

  • mkd1788 on Dec 4, 2009

    wonderful poem…nicely expressed

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