Dedicated to a friend I have on the other side of the pond.

In your eyes I can see

The image of your gentle soul

In your words I can feel

The true depth of your love.

On your shoulder

May I rest?

On your heart

May I leave

A kiss and ever more

Just to say

I love you encore.

You are the one who cares,

Who watches and hopes.

In the shade of my tree

May I say?

You are my Love

Across the sea.

In the sky the bird flies

May it bring

To you my Love

The restless thoughts

Of my loving soul.

One day in an embrace,

Our warmth we shall share

And openly we shall dare.

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  • clay hurtubise on Jun 13, 2009

    Beautiful, heart-warming piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • 101 on Jun 13, 2009

    Beautiful strong emotion of romance. realy soothing write.always,Gary La Buda

  • chris73 on Jun 13, 2009

    Really touchy.

  • Lostash on Jun 13, 2009

    Nice piece. You obviously miss being around them!

  • irishpen on Jun 13, 2009

    Lovely….

  • C Jordan on Jun 13, 2009

    Well written

  • Aaron Paul Hicks on Jun 13, 2009

    Very nice poem, very touching, was this for your partner?
    great work,
    very best wishes,
    Aaron x

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 14, 2009

    Very sweet for your lady love.

  • California Dreamer on Jun 15, 2009

    Beautiful, may you be able to share this with your love one one ~

  • California Dreamer on Jun 15, 2009

    Beautiful, may you be able to share this with your love one day~

    was so lovely, got a typo trying to respond…

  • Princess Dre on Jun 15, 2009

    very nice…heart felt…God Bless- fan/friend – Princess

  • richard reed on Jun 19, 2009

    I love this piece!its beautiful..nice emotion with eclectic values..stay blessed my friend..your fan..Rich

  • Francy on Jun 26, 2009

    Beautiful poem…share it with your love one.
    Keep sharing.

  • Unofre Pili on Jul 6, 2009

    Very nicely crafted piece.

  • PhoenixRox on Jul 11, 2009

    Your sincerity shines right through in this poem. Its brilliant. You will get what you want. Dont ever lose faith. God bless.

  • lillyrose on Dec 7, 2009

    This brought a tear to my eye! I can’t believe I missed this one first time round! you are so special xxxxx

  • Billyfnstacy on Dec 7, 2009

    Very emotional friend. I enjoyed reading this and could feel what you were feeling in a way. What an amazing talent you have.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 8, 2009

    That is such a beautiful and romantic piece. I loved it.

    Christine

  • Vikram Chhabra on Dec 10, 2009

    Very well scripted poem. I could feel the intense emotion!!

  • AlmaG on Dec 10, 2009

    Wow! That’s so beautiful and heartfelt :)

  • nightcharmer on Dec 30, 2009

    Very romantic. You seem like a really sensitive guy. Good poem!

  • MJ Sunderland on Jun 12, 2010

    Simply beautiful. Pure emotion in words.

  • Likha on Jan 28, 2011

    What more can I say? You put out real love emotions here and I am awed by its beauty. I hope he was able to read this. I like this a lot brother.

  • samgoldencoffee on May 6, 2011

    a beautiful piece.
    i loved it.

  • Francois Hagnere on Aug 6, 2011

    Many thanks, my friends, for such lovely comments!

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