My friend died and I’m left as solitary……….

As, I opened the rustling,rusty gate of that barren

I felt my grave is waiting for me.

I’m standing on my friend’s grave and shedding tears.

Those ever green memories like spring are still alive,

How we use to play on seashores?How we use to  play knock,knock Ginger as prank?

We use to jest,tickle,sizzle and hike each ecstasy.

You left me as solitude and this world is coming to trample me.

The war between death and my life is still going

 but now I think to surrender as you left.

You were my power and strength as pith and marrow

I realised that you are really gone.

Now, these sorrows like catastrophe are  on my shoulder,

Ah! so heavy I can’t hold them alone.

I wish the flood from my eyes can turn you alive.Promise………

I won’t eat your ice-cream,I won’t pretend to pay to street hawkers,

I won’t mock at you,I will never say no to sleepover.

I’ll do as you will direct for God’s sake dear, please don’t turn deaf ears to me.

Now,in my world wind is not having directions,

Sea is not thrilled and it don’t pounds on shores as it use to do.

Birds don’t twitter,sky stopped to cry as it’s tears were boon.

Nights are now depressed and restless,moon denies to glisten and gleam.

You took my sigh of relief and when I breath,

I feel pricks in my throat and gravel in my voice.

You are dead and me too,

the only difference is that you are taking rest under the earth

and I’m living on the earth as alive corpse.

I pray that I should be soon in rest in peace.

I’m sure that for my deeds I’ll be in hell and I assure you that

I’ll be at your heaven’s door for playing devil and angel pursue.

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  • naruto100 on Oct 12, 2011

    So tearful words !!!

  • pattiann on Oct 12, 2011

    I am so sorry about your friend. I am sure she is watching over you. Daddy was my best friend ever and he died last year, so I know how hurt you are..

  • Prakash Vaghela on Oct 12, 2011

    nice sharing

  • straw1979 on Oct 12, 2011

    sad one

  • binyumanyun on Oct 12, 2011

    Wonderful illustration.Did you draw it by yourself?Can you teach me how to draw like that?

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 12, 2011

    Friends this is not true story.I think like this as I’m pessimist.No one died just I’m dead and there is need to be buried.

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Oct 12, 2011

    Sorry …and you did a good poem here :)

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 12, 2011

    @binyumanyun I didn’t draw those dear.

  • girishpuri on Oct 12, 2011

    touching

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 12, 2011

    @pattain sorry about ur dad but this is not real story.

  • branzaovidiu on Oct 12, 2011

    very nice, but still…..sad.

  • thelyricwriter on Oct 12, 2011

    I am so sorry for your loss. Your words express your pain, We are here for you though, so know that.

  • JMorgan071 on Oct 12, 2011

    Interesting although sad.

  • Andrew Handley on Oct 12, 2011

    Mighty sad poem you got here Aroosagloomy

  • aisha jamal on Oct 12, 2011

    well weitten arsi !

  • marqjonz on Oct 12, 2011

    I like the line “I won’t eat your ice cream.” It’s good to add a smile to a sad poem; it makes the poem more poignant.

  • Boyka on Oct 12, 2011

    nice share I Like It

  • Redfiery on Oct 12, 2011

    You have a very sensitive heart Aroosa and I like the openess in your poems. Poetry flows beautifully with your pen. God bless You and keep on writing

  • CHIPMUNK on Oct 12, 2011

    Most beautifully expressed

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 12, 2011

    devastating! powerful words!

  • VoIP on Oct 12, 2011

    Sometimes, I wish there was a way to take your heart out, stitch it all up, seal it with a kiss, and then put it back.

    I truly wish I could do that for you. ~me

  • mtrguanlao on Oct 12, 2011

    Oh,I was carried away with your poem,I thought it’s true! Touching poem!

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 13, 2011

    @xdwe65224 Oh so sweet of u.I also wished that to do it for my heart but I can’t mend it.thankx 4 thinking about me and caring.

  • VoIP on Oct 13, 2011

    We will see…

  • tonyleather on Oct 13, 2011

    deep and soulful

  • rajaryanme on Oct 13, 2011

    A good write up.

  • Sunjhini on Oct 13, 2011

    a very touching write up.

  • Yamin2011 on Oct 13, 2011

    a truly unique poem…..like it

  • realityspeaks on Oct 13, 2011

    Heartfelt. Beautifully expressed

  • vijayanths on Oct 13, 2011

    Touching share.

  • juliachild on Oct 13, 2011

    interesting

  • CutezSoNia on Oct 13, 2011

    I Like It

  • ayub75 on Oct 13, 2011

    aroosa its a reality of life.and you explain it in a fantastic way. death is also like a shadow of life. its not you who is in grave and you are seeing your dead body. i feel its me who is seeing you with my dead eyes. death is a long sleep up to the day of judgement and real unlimited life will be start after that judgement day. let us prepare our self for that day when no one will be any one.

  • rgreenfield on Oct 14, 2011

    tragic and intense… thanks for sharing.

  • The Virtual Workers on Oct 14, 2011

    Another marvoulous creations … thumbs up but rather being pessimist try to be optimist and your poetry would low much more … I belive in this

  • my articles on Oct 14, 2011

    Gr8 written from where do you get those pictures…

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 14, 2011

    @my articles, when ever I like some pics I just download those and use them regarding my articles.

  • FX777222999 on Oct 14, 2011

    Memories never fades. That is what we called true friendship.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 15, 2011

    @ayub75 I know every thing.Who is who.what is in real or fake and who and what will last and what will lost cuz I have seen whole world with my naked eyes.

  • Elle64 on Oct 15, 2011

    I am sorry for your loss.

  • Gerard Galvestini on Oct 15, 2011

    I’m sorry for your loss. I also lost a friend, in an accident about a few years ago.

  • freebird989 on Oct 15, 2011

    Awesome..Gracias!

  • ImKarn23 on Oct 16, 2011

    so sad, honey..

  • nurzaira on Oct 17, 2011

    so sad, i’m sorry for your loss.. i like your poem

  • athena goodlight on Oct 17, 2011

    dark and beautiful

  • ittech on Oct 17, 2011

    interesting

  • purpureea on Oct 18, 2011

    sad one

  • Profit Buzz on Oct 18, 2011

    nice poem, I guess the friend is very dear to you.

  • Joe Ram on Oct 19, 2011

    Very touching.

  • princess yuna on Oct 22, 2011

    so sad.. touching.

  • tonywriter on Oct 24, 2011

    sorry to hear this my little friend,
    RIP to ur friend!

  • nurzaira on Oct 25, 2011

    i am here again

  • shubhamkumar on Oct 27, 2011

    great work…………..

  • shubhamkumar on Oct 27, 2011

    ur command on the words are fantastic ……………
    good job keep going……….

  • holly the chef on Oct 30, 2011

    Very, very good.

  • hari1111 on Oct 31, 2011

    So sad :( i hope it wasnt really a death of a friend that motivated this

  • KeddRS on Nov 4, 2011

    Touching.

  • misterdd on Nov 5, 2011

    very sad, but beautifully written

  • Scarix on Nov 5, 2011

    Hiks…so sad T_T ..nice written…

  • beingwell on Nov 18, 2011

    Interesting read.

  • girishpuri on Nov 27, 2011

    very thought ful , i like the content

  • lauralu on Apr 21, 2012

    very well written and so sad (: love Ya

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