To a great friend, and to challenges too, a five minute poem just for you.

What would you say to your friend if you only had five minutes? This is what I would say to mine. 

If I had five minutes, 

and I guess I do,

I would write a poem,

It would be all about you.

I love the way we laugh,

at all the little things we do.

I remember the night,

We cried about sad things too.

I remember the way I felt,

When we saw racism, and I felt the hurt in you.

On one of our movie nights,

When it was just me and you.

Why do people laugh at your skin?

Why do people question it too?

When we hang out all the time.

Do they not know that’s what friends do?

We saw a movie last Friday,

They made fun of your black skin, you knew. 

But Spike Lee kept it real,

He showed love, he showed hate too.

You, my friend, are the best thing,

I’ve ever known in my life. You are so true.

For we over look every stereotype,

In our eyes, everything is new.

Nate, I have never had a better friend,

Or ever spent a better five minutes, It’s cool!

Than right now, this minute right here,

Talking about my best friend, you.

You are always there for me,

And I hope I am there for you.

You helped me see the world,

In a different light, so true.

I could search the world forever, 

and never find another you.

Thanks for being my buddy,

every day, not just when the skies are blue.

I love you, Nate.

My best friend in the world. 

I may sound like a child,

but I love everything you do!

The way you laugh at yourself,

And take hours to get ready, but the time just flew,

I missed my Dropkick Muprhys,

Just to sit and chill with you!

They way you smile at those silly girls,

Who will never know the real you!

This poem is for you N8,

My best friend in the world.

If I could be like anyone, 

I would want to be like you.

So now I end my funny poem,

four minutes have passed,

How can I end a poem for this,

a friend ship that will always last?

We don’t chill as often as I want us too,

but I still care about you,

My friend, the one who opened my eyes,

In how the veil, the world see’s through.

I don’t care if your skin was purple,

Or orange or blue,

I could never have another friend,

Like the one I have in you.

You’ve been there through the hardest times,

I could never forget, and I promise you,

Not a second I would regret.

Even argueing bout how work went last Tues.!

Nate, I promise the lessons I learned from you,

I will never a moment forget you. 

For you taught me love, and hate and trust again,

You taught me a lifetime of knowledge, I will see you soon.

Nathan, my friend, I can see,

There could never be another, better friend like me (and you too!).

You are the laughter of a hundred life times,

You are the best, because you are you. 

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  • Joe Average American on Oct 17, 2011

    True friendship not only knows no boundaries,but will step over any obstacles set up in its path.Very good read.

  • Jsqc Writer on Oct 17, 2011

    A very special deep beautiful poem :)

  • Larinna Chandler on Oct 17, 2011

    Thank you guys! I appreciate the compliments.
    This was a challenge I gave myself last night. Five minutes to write a poem about a friend, not a second more. I had a lot of fun with this one!
    Nate, when you read this…you will see that I didn’t even call you “bonehead” once. Of course today, I realized I left that out! Hmm. Can’t believe I didn’t think of that. Weird.

  • Percy Omenazu on Oct 18, 2011

    A very good one, thanks for sharing…

  • Adam Henry Sears on Oct 18, 2011

    This is a nice little ditty for your friend. It is a little long for the theme you have, and I think it should be broken down into separate thought-segments though. If you keep the free form style maybe you could come up with some more varied rhymes, too.

    Good luck, and thanks for sharing.

  • Larinna Chandler on Oct 18, 2011

    Thanks Adam. I appreciate the time you took to read my poem and comment. I agree it is a little long. I actually did do the segment thing, but it just posted like this. I guess I should go back into ‘edit’ and see if I can fix it. You are absolutely correct on the rhyming. I wasn’t so pleased with how it came out, but since I was using it as a writing challenge…ie…the five minute thing,I left it the way it was. Def. not my best work! Thank you though, Thanks for the the constructive critisism! I LOVED it! Can’t thank you enough! :D

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 20, 2011

    A very nice tribute to your friend. Friends are non-dispensable.

  • Aalkaline on Oct 20, 2011

    Beautiful describe friend.

  • shubhamkumar on Oct 27, 2011

    a poem that can touch anyone’s heart
    well written……

  • girishpuri on Oct 28, 2011

    very effective . touched my heart

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