I dedicate this to my cyber mom who passed away on August 14th 2002. Ma Geri I will always love you. I know you will forever be here with me in my heart.

 

 

She came to me in a bottle,
She settled into my heart.
She was a special lady.
I new that from the start.
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She became my cyber mother.
Oh the strengths she would display.
She help me when my husband died.
When the Angels took him on that day.
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She was Always there for me.
She helped me thought it all.
She may have been a little woman,
But she always stood very tall.
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Her time on Earth has ended.
Still in my life she’ll always be a part.
The Angels came and carried her home.
But she’ll always be with me in my heart.
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She called me her Angel Daughter.
I know she was heaven sent.
Though we never got to meet face to face.
In my life she left more then a dent.
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She looks though the holes of heaven.
Where she now smiles down on me.
Now she’s my guardian Angel.
With me she’ll always be
 

~Collette~
©Copyright 08-18-02

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  • alc on Aug 29, 2009

    Another great one dedicated to someone you aparently were very close to and sry to hear about this! But the way you expressed the poem brings peace! Thanks for the share!

  • Darla Cooke on Aug 29, 2009

    Beautiful!

  • ken bultman on Aug 29, 2009

    Lovely poetic tribute.

  • loualbert on Aug 29, 2009

    This poem has his weak and strong moments. Most of the rhymes work, but there are some that are too much cliche, and seem to have been chosen for the sake of a rhyme.

    The line; “She looks though the holes of heaven.” A mistake in spelling seems to have been made here. Though should have been; through.

    Going back the the rhyne thing, heart/start is one of those overused cliches. Unless it is used in an unique way, most of the times it does not work.

    Chec me out on the site, will you!

  • Emma Green on Aug 29, 2009

    Thumbs up yet again!

  • ducroisjosef on Aug 30, 2009

    You must miss her very much, lovely poem.

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