I wasn’t feeling right so I wrote down all the things that make me feel good and this is what came out; it’s kind of melodic in my head that’s why I’m calling it a tune – but I wouldn’t know how to express music so just make it up as you go along – maybe it’ll make you happy too :) <3(:

I drink coffee
Listen to music
Smoke a little bit…
Then I play my World of Warcraft
And talk to God….
These are the things
That make me happy.

I watch Roseanne
Laugh out loud
Smoke a little bit…
Then I get a big hug from you
And sing along…
These are the things
That make me happy.

I talk to God
Laugh out loud
Drink my coffee
Then play WoW
I listen to music
And sing along
Take a hot bath
Go for a walk

Then I get a big hug from you…

Listen to the rain
Stare at the moon
Sleep in on Saturday
Until about noon
Then I get a big hug from you…
These are all the things
That make me happy.

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Comments (16)
  • lolontka on Apr 22, 2011

    Lovely.It is important to do the things that make you happy!

  • serowa on Apr 22, 2011

    Nice. Life is so simplistic but we at times complicate it with the mundane. you have captured the simpleness of life so well !!!

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  • sloanie on Apr 22, 2011

    Sounds like you drink some real good coffee.
    Nice poem.

  • KRuskin on Apr 22, 2011

    Writing down what’s makes you happy sounds like a neat idea. Thanks for sharing.

  • quiet voice on Apr 22, 2011

    ……Very cute, keep adding to that list. Thanks.

  • thestickman on Apr 22, 2011

    :-)

  • Martin Kloess on Apr 23, 2011

    good work.TY.

  • elnavann on Apr 23, 2011

    Delightful poem

  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 23, 2011

    beautiful happy poem

  • karmicchristian on Apr 23, 2011

    A happy little tune indeed. Thanks.

    Charles
    http://tiny.ly/YiBO

  • Thespeakman on Apr 23, 2011

    hahaha – nice little ditty

  • Anupatil on Apr 23, 2011

    We should make ourself happy then only we can make others happy.nice poem.

  • papaleng on Apr 24, 2011

    Very cute piece.

  • Gail Cavanaugh on Apr 25, 2011

    Nice, it shows you are grateful for what you have.

  • Heloni Lynn on Apr 28, 2011

    @ sloanie – “Sounds like you drinks some real good coffee” – Big LOL!! I really did “L” “OL”… thank you for that.

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