This is a very rough draft of a poem I am writing. Please comment with your opinions, suggestions, comments. Thank you!
My heart aches
Loneliness consumes me
The world hates
Nobody loves thee
With a conditional love, yes
But really
Is that love
Or just the enemy
I know what I need
Satisfaction and Fulfillment
Not from man
But from the heavenly
Oh this war that rages
in my soul
I know oh so well
Where I must go
Yet my flesh overtakes me
Lies show me other ways
But He is strong
He has overcome
So why does my strength fail me
The one cure so close but so far
All I’ve to do is go to Him
He loves me unconditionally
Father, please
Your strength I need
In desperation
I get on my knees
Heal me
Fill me
Satisfy me
Rescue me
I need you
I want you
Come near to me
As I draw near to you
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