I don’t know how to approach you

The laughter and joys feel me like crushing.

With a gladsome smile that has veiled in your poker face

And the bracelet that I have given to you,

“Can you throw it away so that I can start anew?”

 

I saw you walking in a distance

Wearing red t-shirt and “adidas”

Even you’re just walking

My heart is also palpitating

In line with my passion, I’ve wanted to see you

Even all I can see is just your shadow.

I don’t care, even that’s the only thing I can utter

Remember, all I just want is to see you everyday.

I don’t know how to approach you

The laughter and joys feel me like crushing.

With a gladsome smile that has veiled in your poker face

And the bracelet that I have given to you,

 “Can you throw it away so that I can start anew?”

How can I forget you?

What you did to me was too painful

The person that you were talking to

Was my best friend, a long time ago

Now, in this silent heart of mine

My heart keeps on bleeding with envy

Where’s now your  LOVE to me

I feel like I’m locked in those chambers of madness

Insulted by the loud voices of your friends and classmates

And provoked by the punches of rumors

Help me find where to put the burden away!

To torture me with those acts like a voodoo doll.

I can’t beaver anymore, and to reflect myself

On other mirrors of passion I can’t do

Because I can’t really live without your LOVE?

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  • Xian Lotter Sayson on Jul 7, 2011

    So love sickness is nothing to be afraid of, it shows that you have opened yourself up to the love that is your true essence.

  • Claudine faith Sabanico on Jul 7, 2011

    when we give love to the person we choose, make it sure that you are ready to face the unexpected trials.If you really love the person i know it was really hard to forget her or him.the kind of perfect love exist only in God.

  • Lei Anne Stacey Cabusas on Jul 7, 2011

    Its natural to a person to get envy to others,but creation of envy is evil..We need to put God in the center of our life to aviod envy.

  • Lizette Añabeza on Jul 8, 2011

    Envy encapsulates your whole being so never let even a single strand of it touch you.

  • rodeta pollido on Jul 8, 2011

    If we fall in love to someone,we must prepared our selves to face the unexpected.You must not give all your love,lift some love for your self.

  • Rotchel Cardosa on Jul 9, 2011

    There are certain moments in our life that we feel hatred because we got hurt. Its natural to us that we felt envy because were just only human that we could feel the pain but its not the reason that we forget to forgive.. ‘Because keeping the pain inside would keep us bleeding learn to let go the pain.. cause at the right time you could have the right love

  • anamariaedna mancia on Jul 9, 2011

    their are some bad moments that happened in our life we just keep in our heart,thats why we cant forget this so let this out and accept the new moments.

  • Beverlyn Nebril on Jul 10, 2011

    What a hurtful hearts.It is not good to have an envyable feelings because it makes our hearts bleed.

  • Beverlyn Nebril on Jul 10, 2011

    IN THE POEM, INDEPENDENCE DAY:My comment is:What a memorable poem,we can recall the happenings in past and how we become free and being lucky to have our freedom.

  • Saneth Gerodias on Jul 10, 2011

    Having a relationship is not that easy. You have to face all kinds of hardships or circumstances that might came along your way. Whatever it is, you don’t have to give up instead you have to face it and take it as a challenge to the both of you.

  • virgeniemacalinao on Jul 10, 2011

    When we enter an relationship , envy is always there .
    because emotions is already part with our lives especially when we are brokenhearted.

  • angel rose saraum on Jul 10, 2011

    It is normal to us human to feel envy in a relationship but it is a part of our daily living and we must remember that envy is a very big sin.

  • angel rose saraum on Jul 10, 2011

    POEM:INDEPENDENCE DAY:comment:An interesting poem that shows the freedom of the Filipino and it represents the bravery of the Filipino.

  • jane margarett barde on Jul 11, 2011

    Having a relationship is not easy because you can face lots of problem ,but always trust God so that God will guide you.

  • SASAN JOSEPMAR T. on Jul 11, 2011

    sometimes relationship is ironic. its hard to find but easy to lose , makes you feel good but hurts you so bad , opens your eyes but makes you blind, feels up your heart then tears it apart.

  • Vincent M . Georpe on Jul 11, 2011

    If you wish to start another relationship with he same partner, you are not obliged to approach but all you have to do is show to her more good than your previous relationship.

  • Maricher Vismanos on Jul 12, 2011

    As we experience about love like crushing. I feel happy .

  • mariecris jumarito on Jul 13, 2011

    relationship is not easy,they say dont find love coz love will find you.

  • ronalyn batugan on Jul 13, 2011

    Oh, I think this scenario hurts like hell. But again, its time for you to move on, maybe she’s really not the right one for you. Instead, find time for your self to explore wider horizons and mingle with other people. You just have to wait for the right one, and not search for it. Love comes at a right time.

  • cristina lariosa on Jul 13, 2011

    To be envy with someone, we can’t avoid it.It is not a good behavior.Just be thankful, for what you have.

  • emarie lariosa on Jul 13, 2011

    We can’t help to envy someone,especially,if you really love that person.

  • franzacheramei on Jul 13, 2011

    love is not easy to enter because love had any kind of rules.

  • queenieolaco on Jul 14, 2011

    Love makes you cry,happy.In a relationship you must trust each other to avoid the word”HURT”.

  • rainduque on Jul 14, 2011

    In love you can make mistake but the biggest mistake you could ever do is to give up someone you love and say “I Love You” but i will set you free to make you happy..! :-/..
    In a relationship, envy is always there in the heart of insecures.

  • cynthia laganson on Jul 14, 2011

    love is an action but not just a feelings.relationship is not easy.

  • vonebelle on Jul 15, 2011

    love is not just looking into each other eyes but looking outward together in the same direction…

  • vonebelle on Jul 15, 2011

    if you share love,,there peace.

  • Faith Rivera on Jul 15, 2011

    We should avoid envy it makes our self pity.

  • marcniel94 on Jul 15, 2011

    The poem was so touching but it shows great envy but instead of getting envy to others we must force ourselves to reject it because envy is evil..

  • marcniel94 on Jul 15, 2011

    Independence day..,, a very interesting poem that opens the mind of the FILIPINO, in the state of being free….,,

  • Faith Rivera on Jul 15, 2011

    It is memorable for us because it is our Freedom or Filipino Freedom and it can recall the happenings in the past and we are lucky to have it.

  • mary ann magallanes on Jul 15, 2011

    we should control our selves so that we cant feel envy..

  • OLLAH JUN GUIDO on Jul 16, 2011

    If you love you need to accept critisism, inorder you have a good understanding about youre relationship.

  • grachiel on Jul 16, 2011

    only love can make you cry and only love knows why.

  • jezeryl on Jul 16, 2011

    Envy consists in seeing things never in themselves, but only in their relations.

  • christian mae rafaela on Jul 16, 2011

    It is a natural to a person that we get a fall in love to others but secure it because love is not easy.

  • christian mae rafaela on Jul 16, 2011

    we should control our selves if we are falling in love to others.

  • mark navales on Jul 16, 2011

    We shouldn’t feel envy to those close people to love one.

  • mark navales on Jul 16, 2011

    We shouldn’t feel envy to those close people to our love one.

  • Irene Bacquiano on Jul 17, 2011

    “There is always sun-shines after the Rain” as what they said,so if you love someone and then they leave you behind,Don’t worry the right person will come to your way in right time.

  • riana mae dalumpines on Jul 17, 2011

    Love can be both sweet and painful..it’s just a matter of what and where and how you will handle and run your life in what we called it as..”relationship”..why let somebody stay with you if she don’t want to be with you?..Free her the earliest time that you feel you can’t be..it’s easy that way to save your heart from big pains that will follow if you’ll still hold her..

  • glesy aum on Jul 17, 2011

    i know its hard to move on espicially if we still love that person,but what can we do….?If the person we love ,don’t love you anymore…life must go on maybe their is someone out thier who really meant for you.

  • vijoy dimakiling on Jul 17, 2011

    All relationship advice is not created equal.

  • Nerlyn Bastida on Jul 19, 2011

    Base on my knowledge, ENVY is one of the capital sin in this world.. we must control it.. as a human we can’t avoid not to feel this feel but put it in the right way is much better..

  • Annabelle F.Linawan on Jul 19, 2011

    Everyone of us, have this feeling,but dont entertain in your mind and in yourself,because its not healthy and you will never be succed whatever you do in your life.

  • Lorenz Christopher David (BSED-1 ENGLISH 1/01) on Feb 4, 2012

    For me i know its hard to move on espicially if we still love that person,but what can we do….?If the person we love ,don’t love you anymore…life must go on maybe their is someone out thier who really meant for you.But the who keep in my heart is the girl that i will be waiting.

    Oh, I think this scenario hurts like hell. But again, its time for you to move on, maybe she’s really not the right one for you. Instead, find time for your self to explore wider horizons and mingle with other people. You just have to wait for the right one, and not search for it. Love comes at a right time.

  • Lorenz Christopher David (BSED-1 ENGLISH 1/01) on Feb 4, 2012

    For me i know its hard to move on espicially if we still love that person,but what can we do….?If the person we love ,don’t love you anymore…life must go on maybe their is someone out thier who really meant for you.But the who keep in my heart is the girl that i will be waiting.

    Oh, I think this scenario hurts like hell. But again, its time for you to move on, maybe she’s really not the right one for you. Instead, find time for your self to explore wider horizons and mingle with other people. You just have to wait for the right one, and not search for it. Love comes at a right time.

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