The beauty of true love. But does it really exist?

Reveal yourself to me Love,
Escape the place from where you hide,
Lure me into captivity,
Come, stand firmly by my side.

Sweep me away as by a great wind,
On a stormy summer day,
Accompanied by powerful rain,
Love, come have your way.

Touch my heart deeply,
Leave me breathless and still,
Surround me with your presence,
Let me know that you are real.

Prove to me that you exist,
Make a believer out of me,
Release me of my disbelief,
I desperately need to see.

My heart searches for the truth,
Its desire constantly cries out,
Show yourself to me Love,
Free me from all doubt.

Oh, Love if you are still alive,
Love, if you are still true,
Allow me to experience the beauty,
The beauty that lies within you.

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  • Dustin Harrison on Jul 8, 2007

    Wow. Awesome poem!!!!! Makes me feel like the love is there. Please check out my article “10 Godly Ways to Determine True Love” it’s on relijournal.com. It should be on the first page. Thanks. You’ll enjoy it, and do me a favor and leave me a comment.

  • JNV on Jul 11, 2007

    Keep writing! Waiting for more…

  • NAT on Jul 12, 2007

    That was beautiful!

  • Liane Schmidt on Sep 22, 2007

    Beautiful and passionate.*

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • cynthia on May 13, 2008

    awww, your so talented.

  • S M Blomker on Feb 12, 2009

    I like how you wrote this, It touched my heart.TY

  • Karen Gross on Jul 22, 2009

    Beautifully crafted poem. You are a true wordsmith.

  • CTMHolliday on Oct 1, 2009

    Can you here me clapping?

    Wait a minute don’t answer that.

    Keep it up I like.

  • Kakraba Afful on Mar 18, 2010

    this is a Heart Jockey ( purely H.J.!)

  • Joe Average American on Sep 27, 2011

    I love this.it is very good,for some one who doesn’t like poetyr.

  • Joe Average American on Sep 27, 2011

    Did you see my trademark?TYPOOOO

  • Joe Average American on Nov 19, 2011

    Again,very good,for someone who doesn’t like poetry.

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