We met when we were 17. When we were 18 or 19 she dumped me for a few days. I wrote this then.

Though the ways of men are often told,
No one has told of this love grown old;
No one knows of this sorrow inside,
Now, that the sacrifice has lived and died.

Like a High Priestess, before the altar, stood
This guardian of beauty, her hands stained with blood.
My blood. My life. Always as one;
Lost forever, forever now gone.

There was the moon in its frame, the sky.
The lamb on the stone waiting to die.
I knew nothing. I arrived unprepared
To watch the death that no one else dared.

Before me, before that very cold stone,
Was my Priestess of Beauty, standing alone.
The knife in her hand, waiting to swoop
On the neck of the lamb, waiting to droop.

Shining, flashing, it tore through the air
To strike at the lamb, lying quietly there.
Then there was silence filling the night.
Gone was the lamb. There was no fight.

Now she is gone, leaving the stone.
The lamb too, is gone; picked to the bone.
Where are you now My Goddess of Light?
Where is my priestess, out in the night?

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  • s hayes on Sep 17, 2008

    Well written poem – full of feeling

  • jo oliver on Sep 25, 2008

    I can feel the pain in this. Very powerful.

  • jo oliver on Sep 25, 2008

    BTW: Thank you for the comment on my article.

  • goodselfme on Sep 30, 2008

    Much depth with sorrow in this piece, however well said. I know about this emotion.

  • Al Huggett on Oct 2, 2008

    Very beautiful and emotional piece. Well done.
    Feel free to look at my poem http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Stepping-Back.278311

  • C. Jordan on Oct 3, 2008

    Thank you for your kind remarks.
    Thank you Al, I have done and left a remark

  • Allison Jae on Oct 7, 2008

    This was so beautiful.The emotions were dead on. I could feel the loss through the words, but also the hope that things would work out just fine. Great work. I give five stars. Later! AJ

  • Tom Woodside on Oct 15, 2008

    well written poem. it read good and easily. i like the feelings it conveys through your imagery.

  • Peter on Oct 17, 2008

    It’s very good.

  • ggabbic1219 on Oct 20, 2008

    such emotions,in love brings on crazy thoughts
    you write very distinguished…great talent….by your writingg i think u may enjoy my poem FREE…TELL ME WHAT U TINK! sincerly,gabbi

  • PR Mace on Jan 21, 2009

    Well done.

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