A nice poem where you sit on your couch enjoying your home.

It’s simple and clean

where everybody loves chilling

The decorations are just fine

where the aquariums has a good design

I like my flower vase which full of flowers

That match with the carpets on the floor

My couch is soft and adorable

where everyone’s sitting and comfortable.

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  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 6, 2010

    Sounds very comforting.

  • Reilley on Apr 6, 2010

    Nicely done.

  • patampar on Apr 6, 2010

    a house is made of bricks and stone.A home is made of love alone.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 6, 2010

    CUTELY SIMPLE

  • Inna Tysoe on Apr 7, 2010

    That sounds nice

  • yes me on Apr 7, 2010

    Sounds tranquil with the aquarium…. cheers

  • mikky webs on Apr 7, 2010

    Excellent post. Thanks.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 7, 2010

    Nice

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 7, 2010

    That sounds really cosy especially with the aquarium to watch. A nice post.

    Christine

  • Sharif Ishnin on Apr 7, 2010

    Cosy place, comfy and warm. Nice feeling to this.

  • Shamyl on Apr 7, 2010

    Amusing to my eyes. Excellent share.

  • Atanacio on Apr 7, 2010

    Love the soft write and feel to your entry thumbs up!

  • Frances Lawrence on Apr 7, 2010

    Nothing beats the simple comforts of home shared with the people we love.

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 7, 2010

    Sounds like a lovely place to relax.

  • Guy Hogan on Apr 7, 2010

    Nothing can take the place of a real home. Home is where the heart is. I like this poem.

  • giftarist on Apr 7, 2010

    That’s great. Enjoyed reading it.

  • diamondpoet on Apr 7, 2010

    Very peaceful piece, I like my home also.

  • drelayaraja on Apr 7, 2010

    Wonderful.. Home is where love breeds and god lives.

  • LilRoastBeef on Apr 10, 2010

    great job…i love to be at home…

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 14, 2010

    see how harmonical ur

    honey catches more flies

    but lovely harmony many more gr8888888888888

  • athena goodlight on Apr 18, 2010

    Good one. Nothing beats a serene home. thanks for sharing.

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