My Home

pearl2010 on Apr 6, 2010

Tags: Aquariums, carpets, flower, home, Shopping

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A nice poem where you sit on your couch enjoying your home.

It’s simple and clean

where everybody loves chilling

The decorations are just fine

where the aquariums has a good design

I like my flower vase which full of flowers

That match with the carpets on the floor

My couch is soft and adorable

where everyone’s sitting and comfortable.

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Comments (21)

Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 6, 2010
Sounds very comforting.
Reilley on Apr 6, 2010
Nicely done.
patampar on Apr 6, 2010
a house is made of bricks and stone.A home is made of love alone.
LOVELYHONEY on Apr 6, 2010
CUTELY SIMPLE
Inna Tysoe on Apr 7, 2010
That sounds nice
yes me on Apr 7, 2010
Sounds tranquil with the aquarium…. cheers
Michael Eboh on Apr 7, 2010
Excellent post. Thanks.
Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 7, 2010
Nice
Christine Ramsay on Apr 7, 2010
That sounds really cosy especially with the aquarium to watch. A nice post.

Christine
Sharif Ishnin on Apr 7, 2010
Cosy place, comfy and warm. Nice feeling to this.
Shamyl on Apr 7, 2010
Amusing to my eyes. Excellent share.
Atanacio on Apr 7, 2010
Love the soft write and feel to your entry thumbs up!
Frances Lawrence on Apr 7, 2010
Nothing beats the simple comforts of home shared with the people we love.
Ruby Hawk on Apr 7, 2010
Sounds like a lovely place to relax.
Guy Hogan on Apr 7, 2010
Nothing can take the place of a real home. Home is where the heart is. I like this poem.
giftarist on Apr 7, 2010
That’s great. Enjoyed reading it.
diamondpoet on Apr 7, 2010
Very peaceful piece, I like my home also.
drelayaraja on Apr 7, 2010
Wonderful.. Home is where love breeds and god lives.
LilRoastBeef on Apr 10, 2010
great job…i love to be at home…
LOVELYHONEY on Apr 14, 2010
see how harmonical ur

honey catches more flies

but lovely harmony many more gr8888888888888
athena goodlight on Apr 18, 2010
Good one. Nothing beats a serene home. thanks for sharing.

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