A place we stay in, yet we call it ours and we don’t own.
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My hostel
A place to live
A place to die
I cannot say so many don’t get
I cannot say why
A hostel is the only place
One can never own
Yet they all call it their own
You stay in a hostel
Till you get a warm place
In the arms of your lover
Your head you place
I like it, you have your way of expressing your thoughts, good flow until the very last word where you led your viewers to what you really want to point out.
Very expressive and familiar.
We spread our junk around an unknown place to make it our own for the time we are there : ) Nice write Honey
Nice poem.
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