What a time we have had looking for those special boots.

Author’s own photos

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My hubby has got some new boots.

He’s wanted a pair for so long.

And because they had to be just right

Our shopping they did prolong.

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These had to be very special boots

Made of the softest of leather,

With well ridged soles and waterproof tops

Allowing use whatever the weather.

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They had to have room for his sensitive toes

With cushioned inners that mould to his feet.

And air must be allowed to circulate

So his tootsies didn’t suffer from heat.

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His demands were hard to accommodate

And he dragged me from shop to shop,

Until at last we saw the dream boots

Which brought our trials to a stop.

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He tried them on and a sigh did emit

At the comfort he felt from within.

He hopped and he skipped around the store

On his face an enormous grin.

 

Now he takes his walks and shows them off,

And he’s thrilled with the each step that he treads.

He even asked me with a twinkling eye

If he could wear them tonight in bed.

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Christine Ramsay 24.10.11

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  • Saurav Banerjee on Oct 24, 2011

    The boots look really good!

  • johnnydod on Oct 24, 2011

    Another Gem Christine, I will be leaving SU soon so its good we still have Triond to connect.

  • CHIPMUNK on Oct 24, 2011

    Sometimes men are thrilled about their new stuff

  • Elle64 on Oct 24, 2011

    Good on him I hope they will last forever.

  • stryka1966 on Oct 24, 2011

    Another story, so well told … thanks for these personal glimpses, Christine

  • yellow rose on Oct 24, 2011

    great…

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Oct 24, 2011

    What a nice poem you have here ma\’m… :)

    I think that is why \”men, will always be boys\”

  • Freethinking on Oct 24, 2011

    Well it appears Mr. R has a lot of sole….or is it soul? As always, this poem was another fun read.

  • Freethinking on Oct 24, 2011

    Well it appears Mr. R has a lot of sole….or is it soul? As always, this poem was another fun read.

  • Freethinking on Oct 24, 2011

    Mr. R appears to have a lot of sole, or is it soul? As always, you have given your readers another fun piece.

  • yes me on Oct 24, 2011

    This one had a grin at the end liked it Christine cheers

  • pattiann on Oct 24, 2011

    Great poem! I hope your husband enjoys his boots for a long time. My husband used to buy work shoes and he was just so happy when he found a pair. Even regular shoes, but he wanted to wear out the shoes he had and never wore his new shoes. In fact, we have shoes he never wore. He also had undershirts and socks my daughter gave him for his birthday unworn, I gave them to my son in law. My daughter gave my daughter who gave him the money 35 dollars for them which thrilled the one who got the money!

  • Vivek Ratan on Oct 24, 2011

    Smart boots
    To life boost
    Wherever they go
    Things become smooth

    Lovely poem,Christine

  • mphsglo on Oct 24, 2011

    So cute. I’m glad he found just the right boots. I bet he sleeps with a grin on his face. :)

  • lapasan on Oct 24, 2011

    The long wait to buy and finally have that boots is worth it. It is indeed beautiful.

  • Starpisces on Oct 24, 2011

    so well composed one again, and I laugh at the last sentence especially.

  • chitragopi on Oct 24, 2011

    Good that at last he got what he wanted. Fun to read!

  • jen2010 on Oct 24, 2011

    ha ha nice boots.. those are really nice.

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 24, 2011

    Nice rhythm and flow. The last sentence made me laugh.

  • J M Lennox on Oct 24, 2011

    Wonderful. :-) I think if hubby wore them to bed you would have ”’booted” him out – lol. They look great too (both photos).

  • FX777222999 on Oct 24, 2011

    Awesome shopping with this boots and a feeling that comes with it.

  • tonywriter on Oct 24, 2011

    very beautiful and funny poetry 8) :)

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 24, 2011

    Christine I loved it. Your hubby seems like such a jolly fellow. Lucky girl.

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 24, 2011

    fantastic! makes looking and acquiring a pair of boots seem so extraordinary!

  • deedaG50 on Oct 24, 2011

    It feels great to find your exact taste in shoes.

  • LCM Linda on Oct 24, 2011

    An enjoyable read. The last sentence gives me a grin.

  • reiny on Oct 25, 2011

    good boots, no wonder that your hubby like them so much :)

  • gaby7 on Oct 25, 2011

    I think they are really awsome boots! I would do exactly what he is doing with them right now…show them off as often as i can! LOL!

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 25, 2011

    Very cute poem. Now, he has a pair of cooler boots to dance around.

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 25, 2011

    Another interesting poet.

  • Judy Kaelin on Oct 25, 2011

    Excellent and well written. I know just how he feels, good boots are necessary in winter here. I have a really comfortable pair that I begin wearing at the first snow fall and they are my best friends until Spring.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 26, 2011

    Thank you all for your comments. My hubby likes them as much as I do. He even did a pas-de-pas in his boots on the bus the other day for the passengers and nearly fell over when the bus started, lol.

  • Margaret Boseroy on Oct 26, 2011

    What a fun read! Love the picture of your husband’s feet dancing in his new boots (the little glimpse into your garden looks very inviting, by the way). I can almost picture him almost falling over doing the pas-de-pas on the bus (well, his legs anyways).

  • CA Johnson on Oct 26, 2011

    I loved it. That is good that your hubby found a pair of boots that he likes. I thought that was so cute and funny that he wanted to wear them to bed. They must really be comfortable.

  • papaleng on Oct 27, 2011

    A nice read on my Birthday.

  • Joe Ram on Oct 27, 2011

    Great one.

  • Raj the Tora on Oct 28, 2011

    I loved it. Some people are truly passionate about their possessions

  • Val Mills on Oct 29, 2011

    Christine, your poems never cease to entertain and leave me laughing. I do know that feeling of having the perfect boots or shoes, so know how he feels. Did he get to sleepon the sofa that night?

  • mtrguanlao on Oct 30, 2011

    Haha,that’s a good pair of boots Miss Christine! Another great poem! I got this on stumbleupon,up!

  • Mark Ramsay on Oct 30, 2011

    I can’t wait to see them. I would love to have seen Dad’s pas-de-bas on the bus.

  • PR Mace on Oct 31, 2011

    What a fun poem. My husband is funny about his shoes. In fact I hate to shoe shop with him. But it seems your husband now has happy feet.

  • AngelaFaith on Nov 1, 2011

    Another wonderful story with poetry. I can feel the joy!!

  • ittech on Nov 2, 2011

    good one thanks

  • wonder on Nov 8, 2011

    We can all relate to your poem, they are our spontaneous thoughts and feelings.But the boots here is special so slick and soft.Congrats to your hubby for this unique choice.

  • Jacques Berkeley on Nov 17, 2011

    Nice boots.

  • beingwell on Nov 18, 2011

    Haha! Fun photo!

  • Socorro Lawas on Nov 19, 2011

    I didn’t know you’re a humorist.

  • FX777222999 on Dec 4, 2011

    Revisiting this new boots article.

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on May 27, 2012

    My husband is so funny when it comes to shopping for boots or shoes:0
    Really like this poem:)

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