I watched the River Dance on the television over the weekend. It had a powerful effect on me.

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The River Dance

 

Voices raised softly to the beat of the drum,

Gentle and haunting, melodies from the soul.

Depicting a growing awareness of a primitive world

And the sheer power of a land full of joy and passion,

And ridden by the mighty forces of nature. 

As the magic of the dance comes to life,

The tap of feet stepping across the floor

Is the river growing boldly from its source,

Bringing life’s water to the unawakened Earth.

And as the seasons change, the dancers find a world made new again.

But the onset of war brings famine,

And the people are torn from their beloved homeland

And thrown into slavery.

The dancers cavort across the stage in torment,

Like moths flitting from light to light.

The drums questioning and the steps attempting to find answers.

Then, as this new place opens up opportunities,

These people of the river learn new ways to live

And belong to this strange world.

The growing joy on the face of each dancer lights up the stage,

As the dance grows from small reticent beginnings,

And appears to embrace what has been found.

More dancers appear from the darkness

Needing to return to where they came from,

Relating their journey to their homeland so green.

The tapping becomes louder, growing in power and strength.

The music reaches a crescendo,

And the dance revolves faster and faster,

Until with a final beat it stops…..

 

And brings the audience to a crazy applause.

 

Christine Ramsay

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  • Karelee on Apr 13, 2009

    I can see that the dance really drew you into all the emotions that you feel when watching such a spectacular sight and you put them into words for those of us who weren’t so lucky to see it. You painted a great picture and enjoyed it so much. Great job!
    Karelee

  • Unofre Pili on Apr 13, 2009

    Me too enjoyed it. As usual a vivid poetic description.

  • M J katz on Apr 13, 2009

    Hi Christine! I’ve seen the River Dance, too, and my celtic background is in awe of the powerful emotions this dance evokes in one’s spirit! :)
    You did a great job in describing it…I could almost hear the music and feel the beat of feet and drums all over over again!
    A wonderful read!! :)

  • Glynis Smy on Apr 13, 2009

    Brilliant descriptive piece of work Christine! I love the River Dance it makes you feel alive.

  • hfj on Apr 13, 2009

    Great review of river dance Christine. I haven’t seen a performance, but after reading your review i just might catch one. Well done.

  • Annie Hintsala on Apr 13, 2009

    I have never seen this, but your writing makes me want to! It must have been quite beautiful to inspire such passion.

  • Hazel Crowther on Apr 13, 2009

    You can feel the passion in the writing, this came over very well, so glad you enjoyed the experience.

  • Alina Beck on Apr 13, 2009

    River Dance is fantastic, and this is a great tribute to it.

  • Betty Carew on Apr 13, 2009

    What a wonderful description of something that is so beautifully done Christine. Wonderful poem

  • monica55 on Apr 13, 2009

    Very beautiful and excellent description for this lovely dance. Great job as usual.
    Monica.

  • OhSugar on Apr 13, 2009

    River Dance has beautiful moves that I wish I could do. I would never have to diet. The speed and grace make is a spectacular dance to watch.

  • Kate Smedley on Apr 13, 2009

    River Dance is captivating Christine, I agree. Lovely poem, fits it so well.

  • Mike on Apr 13, 2009

    That is such a vivid description of River dance. I never looked at it like that.

  • clay hurtubise on Apr 13, 2009

    Good job! The description is so vivid I feel as if I saw it (and now I can save the money!):)
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 13, 2009

    I love River Dance and I can’t say that about many shows. their music is so haunting and powerful. it’s sad and uplifting at the same time. I can’t praise it too much.

  • seashell66 on Apr 13, 2009

    A beautiful and passionate description. It does get into your soul!

  • Judy Sheldon on Apr 13, 2009

    I felt like I was there. You expressed it so well I could actually feel the beat. I used to love going to the shows when I lived in NY. They can stir something deep inside you that you did not know was there until you get swept up into it.

    I am bookmarking this. Beautiful!

  • Radhika on Apr 13, 2009

    Wow!!!! its really amazing description,I felt as if things are in front of my eyes I can see them very well.Thanks for posting it in.

  • Melody SJAL on Apr 13, 2009

    Stunning!

  • Debra. on Apr 14, 2009

    It’s such an enchanting dance. A wonderful descriptive and lively piece, Christine!

  • Poetic Enigma on Apr 14, 2009

    This is a beautiful poem,
    very powerful and expressive,
    I could feel the effect it had on you
    through your words,
    Very nice!

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 14, 2009

    Thank you so much everyone. Your comments are so encouraging.

    Christine

  • jadeynlee on Apr 14, 2009

    I have been to see the show and it did for me what it does for you. It was so good and your description does it justice.

  • Miss Heda on Apr 14, 2009

    this is brilliant i think i have to it

  • papaleng on Apr 14, 2009

    am nice tribute to River Dance

  • Milton H Peebles III on Apr 14, 2009

    NOW that was CooL!!!!! Very Good! Only way it could be better is to read it aloud while watching the Dance. (preferably while standing)

    Take Care DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine!
    milty

  • Celia Heart on Apr 14, 2009

    That is a lovely piece of work. I also love River Dance.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 14, 2009

    i wish i could see it myself too,thanks

  • Mr Ghaz on Apr 14, 2009

    Excellent! That was great poem about river dance. Lovely 2. Nicely done and well written piece. I LOV it..nice pics 2..Thanx 4 sharing..keep it up

  • Evelyn Moore on Apr 15, 2009

    Lovely piece this. I love River Dance that and Flamenco – both stir something.

  • Don R on Apr 15, 2009

    This has always been a favourite of mine since I first saw it during the Eurovision Song Contest years ago. You have described the essence of the dance so well.

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper on Apr 15, 2009

    Very energetic and full of emotional content. I haven’t seen the original but now I want to even more.

  • mark ramsay on Apr 16, 2009

    I have still got the dvds we used to we used to watch. Riverdance is very captivating.

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Apr 16, 2009

    So beautiful! I want tosee The River Dance!

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 22, 2009

    never know about that, but your words are convincing!

  • Jacques Berkeley on Dec 6, 2011

    Good.

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