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My Journey

Darla Cooke on Sep 30, 2009
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A poem.

I have forever dreamed of rising higher,

some day traveling to a distant faraway land.

I have been given this perfect opportunity,

I will succeed no matter what course I take.

Only good things can happen on this journey,

it will be an interesting experience for me.

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  • diamondpoet on Sep 30, 2009

    Thank you that perfectly explains the direction Iam heading in now. Nice work!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 30, 2009

    My life is at the end of the journey,

    It takes the fun away …

    As one reaches ones destination,

    Let’s continue the journey

    To return another day

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 30, 2009

    I hope it all works out for you. A nice poem.

    Chistine

  • giftarist on Sep 30, 2009

    Nice write!

  • STEVE666 on Sep 30, 2009

    Come to England, Darla. I’ll put you up!!

  • Sourav on Sep 30, 2009

    Nice. Very nice and hopeful!

  • ken bultman on Sep 30, 2009

    Perhaps to the moon and beyond.

  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 30, 2009

    Very nice poem..

  • Linda Lori on Sep 30, 2009

    Pleasingly positive! =)

  • Milton H Peebles III on Sep 30, 2009

    I’ve had the same thoughts, even after visiting Scotland. I want to go back.
    Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • WriteEditSeek on Oct 2, 2009

    Is this about your journey on Triond? I’m thinking you are meaning it to be more literal, but, hey, it works as a metaphor, too. :)

  • Melody SJAL on Oct 4, 2009

    Very nicely written…powerful and uplifting.

  • writing4angels on Oct 5, 2009

    Even the difficulties we face along the way of success makes sense and are must to be passed with.

  • CutestPrincess on Oct 30, 2009

    wonderful poem

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