My Lap Top Died

Erin Miller on Dec 8, 2011

A silly verse to make fun of my current situation.

My lap top croaked

How could this happen

Aw well

It’s was old anyway

I had it for the past two years so now it has to die

My lap top has served me well

But a new one I shall buy

Hmm with all the prices going up it might not make sense

But January the time of deals will suit me best

Away now I go

Using my Mom’s computer to type this small verse

So my disappearance shall commence

But I’ll come back with a bang

You’ll see

Please if you like my work help promote me

As I can’t right now

I plan to release new books when I come back as well

But for now I will work on what I have

And when I come back

I hope you like what’s in store

For I have to go

And now save up every penny to get the one piece

of equipment I so direly need

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Comments (9)

Uma Shankari on Dec 8, 2011
Definitely a laptop should last longer than 2 years. I feel its untmely death could be due to over-heating. The next time you buy a lap top, do invest in a cooling system.
http://computersight.com/hardware/dangers-to-and-from-laptops/
Margaret Boseroy on Dec 8, 2011
So sad to hear about your computer!
okkhattak on Dec 8, 2011
very sad.
naruto100 on Dec 8, 2011
Good one
mtrguanlao on Dec 8, 2011
My old laptop is not working well too,it’s too slow! Good thing hubby bought me a new laptop. I hope you’ll have yours very soon Erin.
Nice poem!
marqjonz on Dec 9, 2011
A tough break. It’s clearly time for to get away from the computer and do more drawing and painting.
mdrkarim7 on Dec 9, 2011
OOPS…. everything must die…
LadyElena on Dec 9, 2011
Santa!!!!

I hope you are reading this….

New one please.
papaleng on Dec 9, 2011
good thing I am using a desktop.

Hi there!