An angel of love…

A little cry, a little fear,

A little pain, and a heart full of hope;

Soft as cotton, fair as jasmine,

On a bright Monday she was born.

No hatred, no revenge,

No anger, not wicked;

She was born as an angel,

An angel of love.

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  • Inzimam on Jun 14, 2011

    nice share,liked it..

  • Dreamy777 on Jun 14, 2011

    beautiful poem

  • yellow rose on Jun 14, 2011

    I look to the sky, everything vibrates.

    I watch the clouds, everything is dancing.

    It’s a dream or real? Cloudy or Clear?

    It’s golden rain or divine miracle?

    Time-off. All palpitates

    And drop into a place i am absorbed.

    Now i am a sphere, a bright bead,

    A drop of dew on a ball of sunshine.

    I look around: there is no heaven and no clouds;

    Only angel wings and flower petals.

    Everything’s song, verse and psalter;

    And I am the rain, melted in love.

  • isloooboy on Jun 14, 2011

    Very nice one and @Rose yours is also very good nice sharing

  • Ebbin Jose on Jun 14, 2011

    Thank you for your comments, and Rose, it was wonderful. Your lines were just perfect, and apt to continue…

  • CHIPMUNK on Jun 14, 2011

    good

  • Rosettaartist1 on Jun 14, 2011

    good one again

  • megamatt09 on Jun 14, 2011

    Well written.

  • chandrra on Jun 14, 2011

    Little but lovable

  • papaleng on Jun 14, 2011

    Short but so lovely. Congrats for that angel of yours.

  • Cassle Tang on Jun 14, 2011

    That sounds so lovely! Your little angel is very precious, I could imagine her smile and a scent of peace coming from her.

  • Subchan on Jun 14, 2011

    beautiful words

  • vietnam on Jun 14, 2011

    short sweet and simple
    just like an angel
    from all angles

  • jrabraham on Jun 14, 2011

    Congratulations! ;)

  • ancagrig on Jun 16, 2011

    simply beautiful!

  • epania on Jun 17, 2011

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    ║║║║╦║║║║║║╦║╔╝╠╬╬╣
    ╚╩╩╩╩╩╩╝╚╝╚╩╩╝. ╚╩╩╝

  • juliachild on Jun 19, 2011

    Very good article!

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