I chomp and I chew, I’ve destroyed you!

Mars Bar,

You take me far.

Bite after bite,

A tasty delight.

As I shorten your size,

A part of me dies

Knowing you’re gone

You didn’t take long

The taste fresh on my tongue,

Warm air fills my lungs,

You elevated me,

This is where I want to be!

I want to chomp,

I want to chew,

I want my bar,

I just want you!

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  • Allyx21 on Feb 17, 2011

    nice :)

  • Poetic Enigma on Feb 19, 2011

    This is a very creative piece! I really enjoyed reading your poem! Thank you for sharing (:

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