It will be so wonderful if we can live a place where we dream of.

Take a peek in my little world

Where the sun is shining

The birds are always singing

The cool wind are always blowing

And I am always smiling

 

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Take a peek in my little world

Where war was never a word

Guns were never fired

Bombs were never wired

And I am always smiling

 

Take a peek in my little world

Where famine and hunger never happen

Children and mothers never saddened

Fathers and brothers never killing

And I am always smiling

 

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Because I had peek into your big world

Where storm, blizzard and flood covered your lands

Turning everything into dust and sands

Where human blood are shed everywhere

Peace and love were never spare

Children and mothers are always crying

Fathers and brothers are always fighting

And I was never ever smiling

 

 Picture courtesy of Prescott at Flickr

 

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  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 15, 2009

    A very touchable poem to heart..

  • Starpisces on Nov 15, 2009

    Your little world is a great place, I would like to join too!
    A touching poem.

  • K.Reshma on Nov 15, 2009

    Wonderful

  • Themax on Nov 15, 2009

    very touching and wonderfully written poem!

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 15, 2009

    A very good poem.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 15, 2009

    Very creative and heartfelt poem! A very effective and terrific message!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 15, 2009

    I know, the real world is not very pretty but it\\\’s up to every one of us to make our own little portion better.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 16, 2009

    Nice piece.

  • Patrick Regoniel on Nov 20, 2009

    That’s so nice. I wish that little world will become big. :-)

  • Adam Henry Sears on Nov 24, 2009

    Good job, Borneon! This piece has a good message, some great sound-rhymes and a suitable structure. Thanks for sharing.

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 26, 2009

    very good work, you little world is beautiful, great expressions used

  • thuanynguyen on Dec 23, 2009

    An amazing poem.

  • Stan Wilson on Dec 28, 2009

    one day we will have a better world..this is a very nice poem…

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