Love.

 

My love for you knows no bounds
And some day it will pull me to the ground.
And on my knees I will ask it of you
If you and I could become one.
And when God answers my prayers
When I stand at the alter, you will be there.
I will love you forever until i die.
And everyday, to God will I praise.
For sending me an angel, so beautiful and true
An angel so perfect, It is only be you.

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  • cardy on Nov 17, 2009

    What a lovely write so sweet liked this a lot

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 17, 2009

    those were beautiful expressions of love…nice poem!

  • ken bultman on Nov 17, 2009

    A beautiful love song.

  • AlmaG on Nov 17, 2009

    Surely God has the perfect girl for you… You’ll find her in God’s time :)

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 17, 2009

    Beautiful poem!

  • Judi Eddy on Nov 17, 2009

    Lovely poem, I hope she appreciates it

  • Hansika on Nov 17, 2009

    wonderful share….

  • wonder on Nov 17, 2009

    A soft melody and a great picture.

  • ReggieLutz on Nov 17, 2009

    nice share

  • xoxo on Nov 17, 2009

    Beautiful. Definitely you’ll get her ‘yes’ ;)

  • mathurans on Nov 17, 2009

    Amazing

  • Nydia Esther on Nov 17, 2009

    this is so beautiful and well, romantic.. :)

  • Linda Lori on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice poem! =)

  • Starpisces on Nov 17, 2009

    Romantic poem, also the picture

  • Darlene McFarlane on Nov 17, 2009

    Beautifully written. I loved it.

  • Atanacio on Nov 17, 2009

    wow i loved this piece :)

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 17, 2009

    nice poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 17, 2009

    A very beautiful and romantic piece. Well done.

    Christine

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 17, 2009

    if at the altar

    you alter

    come to me

    i am a love doctor

    I am the doctor
    Who knows your pulse?
    Act not at a moment’s impulse
    Life shall repeat
    History it will create
    All human beings
    Will continue to procreate,
    Writers like me
    Who are free?
    Will write poetry
    My friend for ye

  • K.Reshma on Nov 17, 2009

    Very beautiful poem

  • lucia anna on Nov 17, 2009

    Excellent

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 17, 2009

    Very sweet, Teves!

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 17, 2009

    Awww such a lovely poem,very sweet and wonderfully expressed!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 17, 2009

    How sweet, lucky girl.

  • vycess on Nov 17, 2009

    Very nice poem!…

  • Eunice Tan on Nov 17, 2009

    Beautiful with strong message

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 17, 2009

    lovely poem.

  • deep blue on Nov 18, 2009

    A passionate write kabayan.

  • Jane Jane on Nov 21, 2009

    lovely piece.

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