My Love Poem

UltramanJC on Jun 27, 2009

Tags: desertification, love, Poetry

In each hour of every day…

This poem more and no less
It is a record of love you love you love you
Seconds in each in every moment in each of
In each hour of every day in the life of
Love you all more than a little
Love you all more than some

This poem is not complex or simple
It records every time our misunderstanding
Every dispelled misunderstanding, as well as after the germination of love
It records the date each time we
Every second of time and space, as well as a common cause

I would like to let you the people I love
In every inch of the land through
Cents in every breath of air had
Think you have more than one point
Some think you have more than

Let this love desertification clear rivers Beta
Let us play one tour in which we drowned
Let this little love of the stars Beta desertification
I tell you endless love
This is our common love of the Beta
Let her continue to go on writing it
Until the end of time

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Cynthia Bartlett on Jun 28, 2009
ah…love you too! (blush)
Jackie Stroud Painter on Jun 28, 2009
Nice job!
bby on Jun 28, 2009
great job check out mine tell me what you think
Avery on Jun 28, 2009
this is sweet. (:
check mine out (:
its called A Love So Divine.
Princess on Jun 28, 2009
I like this!
jason on Jun 28, 2009
thanks!
ronaldo on Jun 28, 2009
what a nice poem man!
kyle gilleece on Jun 28, 2009
great job if you wanna check out my poem and tell me what you think?
Wylrhyss Terrado on Jun 29, 2009
You are a very inspiring person for writing this beautiful art…

Wylrhyss Terrado
princess serenity on Jun 29, 2009
The ads messed you poem form.
UltramanJC on Jun 29, 2009
this is what i sent to my ex gf b4..
mistahsparklez on Jun 29, 2009
very nice!
BowLove on Jun 30, 2009
” Hold on “

Don’t let go ,

just hold me tight .

Kiss me softly ,

by the candle light .

Turn up the music ,

this is your song .

Come close baby ,

this is where you belong .

Do you want to dance ?

I love the way you move ,

give me a chance ,

I will improve !

As time goes by ,

and moves so fast .

I’d like it to stop with you ,

so I could make it last .

Make a wish every day ,

so I can hope it will come true.

I’m sending Love your way ,

and kisses just for you .

You are my everything ,

more than words can say .

I wish you never left ,

I wish You were with me everyday

………by R.M.D…………6-29-2009
Alex Feinman on Jun 30, 2009
No offense but this is one of the worst poems ever. It really makes no sense, and I just don’t get y u press Enter where u did. And at least make it rhyme. I know ur trying to make it seem like a mysterious and romantic poem, but this sucks. It might be because I don’t know much about peoms, but hwhen I read it, it feels like someones stuck a knife up my ear while listening to white noise and is pelting me with stones. No ofense, but please revise it.
UltramanJC on Jun 30, 2009
this is no too good
rizzei on Jul 1, 2009
it’s okay. kinda nice somehow:)
katerose on Jul 8, 2009
vevy nice

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