Comments on: My Love Poem http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/ Thu, 16 Feb 2012 14:38:19 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: katerose http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/comment-page-1/#comment-837317 katerose Wed, 08 Jul 2009 12:48:05 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/#comment-837317 vevy nice vevy nice

]]> By: rizzei http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/comment-page-1/#comment-837315 rizzei Wed, 01 Jul 2009 14:39:01 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/#comment-837315 it's okay. kinda nice somehow:) it’s okay. kinda nice somehow:)

]]> By: jason chong kean hong http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/comment-page-1/#comment-837313 jason chong kean hong Wed, 01 Jul 2009 05:53:06 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/#comment-837313 this is no too good this is no too good

]]> By: Alex Feinman http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/comment-page-1/#comment-837311 Alex Feinman Tue, 30 Jun 2009 19:33:32 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/#comment-837311 No offense but this is one of the worst poems ever. It really makes no sense, and I just don't get y u press Enter where u did. And at least make it rhyme. I know ur trying to make it seem like a mysterious and romantic poem, but this sucks. It might be because I don't know much about peoms, but hwhen I read it, it feels like someones stuck a knife up my ear while listening to white noise and is pelting me with stones. No ofense, but please revise it. No offense but this is one of the worst poems ever. It really makes no sense, and I just don’t get y u press Enter where u did. And at least make it rhyme. I know ur trying to make it seem like a mysterious and romantic poem, but this sucks. It might be because I don’t know much about peoms, but hwhen I read it, it feels like someones stuck a knife up my ear while listening to white noise and is pelting me with stones. No ofense, but please revise it.

]]> By: BowLove http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/comment-page-1/#comment-837309 BowLove Tue, 30 Jun 2009 16:07:14 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/#comment-837309 " Hold on "<br /> <br /> Don't let go ,<br /> <br /> just hold me tight . <br /> <br /> Kiss me softly ,<br /> <br /> by the candle light .<br /> <br /> Turn up the music ,<br /> <br /> this is your song .<br /> <br /> Come close baby ,<br /> <br /> this is where you belong .<br /> <br /> Do you want to dance ?<br /> <br /> I love the way you move ,<br /> <br /> give me a chance ,<br /> <br /> I will improve !<br /> <br /> As time goes by ,<br /> <br /> and moves so fast .<br /> <br /> I'd like it to stop with you ,<br /> <br /> so I could make it last .<br /> <br /> Make a wish every day ,<br /> <br /> so I can hope it will come true. <br /> <br /> I'm sending Love your way ,<br /> <br /> and kisses just for you .<br /> <br /> You are my everything ,<br /> <br /> more than words can say .<br /> <br /> I wish you never left ,<br /> <br /> I wish You were with me everyday<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> .........by R.M.D............6-29-2009<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ” Hold on “

Don’t let go ,

just hold me tight .

Kiss me softly ,

by the candle light .

Turn up the music ,

this is your song .

Come close baby ,

this is where you belong .

Do you want to dance ?

I love the way you move ,

give me a chance ,

I will improve !

As time goes by ,

and moves so fast .

I’d like it to stop with you ,

so I could make it last .

Make a wish every day ,

so I can hope it will come true.

I’m sending Love your way ,

and kisses just for you .

You are my everything ,

more than words can say .

I wish you never left ,

I wish You were with me everyday

………by R.M.D…………6-29-2009

]]> By: mistahsparklez http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/comment-page-1/#comment-837307 mistahsparklez Tue, 30 Jun 2009 02:18:10 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/#comment-837307 very nice!<br /> very nice!

]]> By: jason chong kean hong http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/comment-page-1/#comment-837305 jason chong kean hong Mon, 29 Jun 2009 17:16:39 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/#comment-837305 this is what i sent to my ex gf b4.. this is what i sent to my ex gf b4..

]]> By: princess serenity http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/comment-page-1/#comment-837303 princess serenity Mon, 29 Jun 2009 16:17:03 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/#comment-837303 The ads messed you poem form. :( The ads messed you poem form. :(

]]> By: Wylrhyss Terrado http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/comment-page-1/#comment-837301 Wylrhyss Terrado Mon, 29 Jun 2009 14:33:46 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/#comment-837301 You are a very inspiring person for writing this beautiful art...<br /> <br /> Wylrhyss Terrado You are a very inspiring person for writing this beautiful art…

Wylrhyss Terrado

]]> By: kyle gilleece http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/comment-page-1/#comment-837299 kyle gilleece Mon, 29 Jun 2009 02:30:23 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/my-love-poem-2/#comment-837299 great job if you wanna check out my poem and tell me what you think? great job if you wanna check out my poem and tell me what you think?

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