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My Lovely Pillow

zulfiqarali5 on Oct 15, 2010
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Poem.

I love my pillow

this make me sleep well

so that i can see

many dreams

which i can,t see

in the day to

be calm and cool

my pillow is my

mother tap

whenever i put

my head on it i feel tap

of my mother

as it i

Love my pillow

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  • Raj the Tora on Oct 15, 2010

    nice poetry.

    Candid comment: It is Mother’s Lap and not Mother Tap. Please rectify this. Thanks.

  • zulfiqarali5 on Oct 15, 2010

    ok dear ! thanks

  • cathyjones on Oct 15, 2010

    nice share thanks !

  • giritharanj on Oct 15, 2010

    nice – gj

  • drelayaraja on Oct 15, 2010

    Nice share

  • cathyjones on Oct 15, 2010

    thanks

  • Noeal V on Oct 15, 2010

    Nice Share.

  • Lord Banks on Oct 15, 2010

    Sweet little poem well done. LB

  • SuperMember on Oct 15, 2010

    Excellent share! :) comment my articles back

  • ishinimrod on Oct 15, 2010

    Nice share my friend.

  • Vivek Ratan on Oct 15, 2010

    We are sleeping on the same pillow

    In the eyes of mom, happiness glows

    Our faces are cute like rose

    My hand is on your cheek and your hand is on my nose

    Beautiful poem,Zulfi

  • Adrn0919 on Oct 15, 2010

    Thank you for sharing.

  • jamesII on Oct 15, 2010

    I imagine good mothers are soft! Cool and calm comparison! Cool!

  • carissimi on Oct 15, 2010

    lovely write!

  • Dragoonk on Oct 15, 2010

    Thank you for sharing

  • William2010 on Oct 15, 2010

    I love my pillow too :-)
    Nice poem, and thank-you for sharing.

  • giftarist on Oct 15, 2010

    That’s lovely.

  • Amanda Joy on Oct 15, 2010

    I think that “Mother’s Tap” makes sense, in that one is “tapping into” the spirit of something gone, such as the cuddly sweetness of infancy. P.S. Vivek Ratan, I love your poetic comment! Very funny!

  • Ubel Ein on Oct 15, 2010

    Nice poem.

  • zulfiqarali5 on Oct 16, 2010

    thanks everyone !

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Oct 16, 2010

    Awesome and oh so sweet.

  • Rehoboth on Oct 16, 2010

    $- nice post-$

  • kazmi424 on Oct 18, 2010

    a great post

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