You’re my only missing tile.

True Love survives the test of time,

Waiting for the bells to chime,

Down the aisle,

I’ll promise that you’re my only missing tile. 

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  • Guy Hogan on Feb 9, 2010

    That’s a good way to put it. Now the speaker of the poem is complete.

  • Atanacio on Feb 9, 2010

    The poem was good but truth be told seeing the title I was expecting some floor working going wrong LOL good write :)

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 9, 2010

    Nice poem.

  • AlmaG on Feb 9, 2010

    Mystery solved. Wonderful poem.

  • johnnydod on Feb 9, 2010

    great poem

  • Wiggles18 on Feb 9, 2010

    Lovely poem.

  • amandeep13 on Feb 9, 2010

    Great Piece

    Keep it up

  • Mohd Huzaifa on Feb 9, 2010

    Nice Lines of poem.)

  • drelayaraja on Feb 9, 2010

    Good one..

  • Sushant94 on Feb 9, 2010

    small touching n holding poem

  • sambhafusia on Feb 9, 2010

    well written…nice share…

  • Sourav on Feb 9, 2010

    Short and nice! Well done.

  • lillyrose on Feb 9, 2010

    short but sweet!

  • Michael Eboh on Feb 9, 2010

    Nicely written poem! Keep it up….

  • VTech on Feb 9, 2010

    Nice Post , Thanks For Sharing.

  • Jenilia12 on Feb 9, 2010

    very well expressed.

  • Eunice Tan on Feb 10, 2010

    So nice.

  • Frances Lawrence on Feb 10, 2010

    quite right, true love stands the test of time.

  • Anupam Kachroo on Feb 10, 2010

    gud..

  • Jane Jane on Feb 10, 2010

    now that’s sweet.ayih..=)

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 10, 2010

    very well expressed….

  • papaleng on Feb 10, 2010

    you have expressed your genuine thoughhts in so short a poem. Just wondering bakit tile? pwede namang smile, while.. ah basta cute itong gawa mo, period!

  • STEVE666 on Feb 10, 2010

    Quirky!

  • albert1jemi on Feb 11, 2010

    excellent share

  • giftarist on Feb 11, 2010

    That’s great!

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 11, 2010

    love it… nice work as always!

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 11, 2010

    Thanks for sharing,

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 11, 2010

    Good way of putting it :)

    Inna

  • Cynthia Cox on Feb 13, 2010

    Sometimes the sweetest things spoken are when the least amount of words are used; beautiful job!

  • deep blue on Feb 13, 2010

    Short but rocks. I wish you get the missing tile to feel the empty space. Happy valentine’s, Mish.

  • diamondpoet on Feb 14, 2010

    Great post thanks for sharing.

  • tytyty0062 on Feb 16, 2010

    nice poem!! short and to the point :)

  • standingproud on Feb 22, 2010

    Wonderfully versed :)

  • rizzei on Mar 11, 2010

    interesting as always mish^^muwaaaaah

  • simplyoj on Mar 27, 2010

    Short and sweet.

  • lillyrose on Apr 1, 2010

    perfect!

  • Ranveer Singh Battu on Dec 29, 2010

    could have been a little long…. but still it was sweet….

  • Jordan Sawchuk on Jan 8, 2011

    so much truth in so few words…. good poem.

  • T. S. GARP on Jan 21, 2011

    That was nice and sweet….

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